I'll try. It's just... I thought I was good man lmao. I know I wasn't perfect but I feel fucking amateur. I was confident and now I don't even want to look at my drafts rn even
I just dropped chapter 22 of Ultraviolence. Another one of my more action heavy scenes. I was wondering how people felt about the way I do action. You can read 22, or any of my other action scenes.