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Write the chapter. Read through paragraph by paragraph and replace telling words by adding details. Check grammar for issues. Line edit vigorously an hour later, removing sentences that aren’t needed, words that create clutter, and rearrange sentence structure for the mood I’m looking for. Make...

My apologies, that was too harsh Osana. I really think Osana should find someone who fits her better. 2D-Kun is happy to be with 2D waifus. Which is fine. He may not want to deal with the issues 3D relationships bring. Real relationships are stressful at times, and most end in heartbreak. He may...

Aren’t you, excuse me, isn’t she just a delivery girl then? I order food, sometimes women deliver. And if friendship is ok, then you, I mean, she can just text him/play games online with him. They have lockdowns now anyways.

This is a case of Osana-Chan’s (wink wink) poor evaluation of herself. She needs to move on. Osana-Chan has either valued herself so low that she thinks she needs to beg for Hikkomori-kun’s affection, or, she has valued herself too high, believing she is the only one capable of turning him from...

Zuzu’s Petals ?

Is... this a hypothetical? Please admit, are you Osana-Chan?

Of the two books I’m posting here, it went like this. I wanted to write about a weak person trying to survive an apocalypse. For that story, I’ve mostly followed the characters(for the most part, just my MC), but I’ll also jot down some info I want to place in each chapter. The other story, I...

I’m gonna guess this is fake. But my God... if this is real, I’m really thankful someone made that. ? ? And if you believe someone is holding an ? you’ll probably stay away (admittedly, some may see that as a challenge) But yeah, we really did adopt the Imperial system from Britain, as we were...

We merely adopted the system. Now we can go back to 12” in a foot as the one true and proper measurement system.

Got into an argument once on Twitter. Guy had no way to refute anything I said. I just got tired and said whatever. He sent me this picture. Pissed me off so much it turned into hours of pointless arguing. :sweating_profusely: I deleted Twitter shortly after. Kept the picture, though. Finally...

I agree. When deep diving into a character using third person it certainly should be used, and can be used quite well. But often times I see writers dismiss the emotional tone in third person for some reason. They try the “show don’t tell” but generally leave it to physical descriptions. They...

My guess is this is too late, but just thank readers in the authors note. If they comment, then interact in the comment section. If they don’t, that means they just want to read the chapter and don’t care for further interaction.

My style depends on the character's mood, the tone of the story, the genre, and the world's setting. Something less serious will be more like a light novel. A more depressing world has less dialogue, moodier writing, and a mix of sentence fragments when writing first person.