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Cool. Hopefully it will help with future reader’s expectations.

As many as they can imagine.

Many blurbs aren’t written by the authors. Editors or other authors will often write Blurbs. Stephen King discusses blurbs he wrote. Feel free to use what I wrote if you want. This line sounds like she’s running nonstop. No time to explore her changes. It’s even darker than before because of...

[7/final] You can’t change what readers expect fully, but you can direct them. Generally, whatever you put in the blurb, the readers will hope to see in the story. Your blurb’s your promise. So, there’s always the goal to fulfill the promise. Also, accept that you can’t please every reader, just...

[6] So in this, you are telling the readers there’s a psychological aspect. She’ll struggle to cope with this new world. She’ll explore all the things that come with her new body. It lets them know the world is dangerous, but at the same time, there will be some light-hearted moments.

[5] She must overcome the trauma of her murder, learn how to accept her new reality, enjoy all the pleasures that come with the body she’s always wanted, and survive, for the world is not a game. Now, if only she could find a way around the pesky language barrier. Now, if only she could find...

[4] 1. Learn the language 2. Overcome the trauma of her murder because of the lack of acceptance. 3. Learn to accept her new reality, her new body, and finally do the things she’s dreamt of doing 4. Find a way to survive in a dangerous world Can the last line be edited?

[3] Now within that last line, you’ve told the readers what to expect. Have you worked to meet those specific expectations? Are there some things you can add to this line that they may not expect, but are there? Lets look at some of the challenges you want to convey from this post and a little...

[2] 1. Learn the language -> an obstacle readers will expect her to work on 2. Explore -> Vague. This can mean anything, so not much to draw from. 3. Reconcile her relationship with death, life, and love -> obstacles readers expect her to work on 4. Survive, for the world is not a game -> this...

[1] Hmm... well, anytime you throw yourself out there, prepare for harsh criticism. Expectations are generally based on your blurb. Let’s take the final line for example. she must learn the language, explore, reconcile her relationship with death, life, & love, but most of all, survive, for...

:blob_reach: Tell me. Did someone sneak up in the dark and plunder your latest chapter for loose words? It’s ok. Let it out.

? I sympath? with you. Please be sure to moistur? properly.

So, let’s say Bill doesn’t go to college, and earns $15 an hour as a mechanic. The government would be taking money from Bill to pay for someone’s college degree in the “free college” scenario. Take out of that whatever you want, but college is not for everyone, and Bill should not have to pay...

Hmmm... The reason why sports scholarships work is the money the student brings in. For example, a star player helping the team will draw in crowds, selling tickets and merchandise. As for colleges. Tuition is high in the US because of government backed loans. And you have to remember...

Pretty sure our manufacturing issues have more to do with corporations shipping jobs out and bad trade trade agreements. The idea of, we give countries paper, and they give us cheap goods. Most Americans don’t look down on manufacturing at all. But well, that’s political stuff. I’m just glad we...