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  1. Lmae

    Real-Life Horrors

    I get enough horrors from the news.
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    Military Run Empire

    Isn't that Naruto? I picture it as a country that values strength and ability over everything else. If you aren't born with something useful for military, you will be sent to work in the fields or the mines to die. Also you are easy picking for those people in power. They can do whatever they...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    I will toss my glove on the ground. En garde. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2181545/altered-one/
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    Ask anything

    What is your favorite music genre? If the answer is Rock/Metal, did you get into it by watching AMVs?
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2181545/altered-one/
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    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    The first five chapters of my book is the mc trying his best to help others but losing because he is outmatched. The middle of the book is him training and dealing with the cards he was dealt. Meeting new friends and investigating until the midpoint. The ending of the book is him getting a win.
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    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    For me, I keep getting he is okay or not bad, but he needs more. At worst I heard was that he was boring, or lacked aura. If he already has the basic stuff: a goal, challenges, flaws, what is the missing piece? How do you turn an okay or meh mc to one that the reader will get excited over?
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    Writing How important are dialogue tags in your fiction?

    I try to minimize my use of dialogue tags by using stage direction and removing them if the conversation is between two people . When I do use dialog tags I try to stick with said..
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    How does your protagonist achieve peace?

    1. What is meaning "peace" to your protagonist? Doing his part in society to help people. 2. Who are worth protecting? The citizens of his country. 3. Who are threats/enemies? His godfather, his godfather's apprentice, and criminals who use their powers to hurt people. 4. How does your...
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    A Butter Poll

    Margarine is for people who are too impatient to wait for butter to soften.
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    What is your dream?

    To have my book picked for a weekly book club.
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    Stop AI Witch-hunting!

    Most of those writers were bored rich people writing for other bored rich people, since the peasants could hardly read.
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    Bottlenecks of Mystery Novels

    Things I learned when writing my novel: -Magic and Mystery is hard to mix, because magic breaks logic and you can end up angering your readers. You either have to make your story a standard murder mystery with a wizard using magic to solve it. Like the Eyes' Have it or the Dresden files...
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    Some Character art

    Thank you
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    Some Character art

    Old sketch back when Casimir was Ivan.
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    After Posting Chapter 1, I'm posting in Forums to keep "Accountability"

    Congrats on this new and exciting step on your writing journey. I had trouble finishing longer stories, until I completed my first book, that was around 60K. Now for me, writing a book from start to finish is a lot easier, but revising it still come difficult. As my beta reader who helped...
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