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  1. Zagaroth

    Do you mind real life physics when you create a "fantasy" world

    My baseline for all physics and related topics such as geology and ecology is the real world. Magic is a layer on top of that which can alter things. For example: There is a east-west range of mountains across a continent in the northern hemisphere. They tend to 'catch' clouds and cold air on...
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    Is Your Protagonist Recognized by Google?

    I have 3 MCs, and simply skipped using any one of their names. Also, using Start Page rather than Google (otherwise account setting stuff would bring my book higher). Using all three names (Mordecai, Moriko, and Kazue): All the front page results were relevant. Using 2 names (repeated for all...
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    Writing Any tips not to make slow-burn a yapfest?

    Have the conversation take place while the character are *doing* something, even as simple as a meal. Intersperse the dialog with actions, such a gesturing with a fork, or pausing to sip their drink thoughtfully before answering a question. If you want to break up the conversation more, have...
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    How do you rate your own writing?

    I would rate my early chapters as 6-7, before I edited or re-wrote them. I would rate my current work as 7-8, with maybe the occasional section of 9. I'm far from perfect (or my editor wouldn't have to put in so much work), but I am constantly improving. Then, of course, there is the matter...
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    What is the moral message of your novel?

    Bigotry is bad and love takes many forms; deal with it or GTFO. Note: I did not set out for this moral meaning, it just developed along with the story.
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    As a new writer with brain fog and severe laziness, Any Advice

    Brain Fog and "Laziness", unable to even do that which you want? Top recommendation: Consider getting evaluated for ADHD. Laziness is only doing what you want, and not that which is inconvenient. If you have trouble gathering yourself to do the things you actually want to do, it may be ADHD.
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    As a writer, what do you feel your greatest strengths and weaknesses are?

    My greatest strength is easily making characters who develop very real feeling personalities. Naturally, with all writing, there is a limit to how deep and complex a character can be, but I think mine at least approach the limit of what you are going to find without doing a 1st person slice of...
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    I Can’t Write Romance…

    I'm 50 years old, and my 12th anniversary will be later this year. I have no problem writing a happy, healthy romance, because it is what I have always wanted and what I now have. In order to be a *good* romantic partner, one must first be capable of being a good friend. Friendship involves an...
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    How often do you check your story’s stats?

    Highly variable; basically am I being twitchy and clicking on things because I need some stimulation. So I may go days or weeks without looking, and then check three days in a row or what ever.
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    Writing How do y'all figure out story or worldbuilding problems that you're stuck on?

    For me, my stories all start with ideas about the characters. Then I have to figure out where the characters are that this idea or moment could take place in. Everything else rolls out from there. But as no one story explores or overshadows the entire world (I keep my power scaling relatively...
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    Writing How do y'all figure out story or worldbuilding problems that you're stuck on?

    To a large extent, the story and the world building go hand in hand for me. I world build to answer the questions that come up in story, and that shapes the next part of the story. Here's an example of pieces of my worldbuilding work flow...
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    Is it true that some authors spend time describing a character eating breakfast or the texture of toast?

    So, for a moment I thought maybe you were a sex-repulsed asexual (https://lgbtqia.wiki/wiki/Sex-Repulsed) but that wouldn't explain your reaction to filial bonds. That one, um, might be something you want to talk with a counselor or therapist about.
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    Is it true that some authors spend time describing a character eating breakfast or the texture of toast?

    Sure, on occasion, though not too much detail. It's not generally a major focal point, but it can add some depth to a scene and character. Example: this was part of a little bonding scene between Fuyuko and some adoptive family.
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    Dashes in Writing, AI

    alright, so I just started incorporating en and em-dashes into my writing, and learning the exact differences is fresh in my head. We have 3 dashes. - normal dash, often used as a connector, when two words are being used as one word. Example: "a spell-charged ball of foxfire" (from my latest...
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    Tournament Arcs?

    I didn't exactly have a normal tournament arc. :) The MCs were the hosts. Though that was part of the inspiration for me introducing a new character with a (temporarily) mysterious background/origin with his own reasons to be entering the tournament. Which I revealed slowly. And once his arc...
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    Tournament Arcs?

    Consider just not writing out every fight. Skim and summarize over some of the earlier fights, especially if the rules of the tournament allow the people setting it up to deliberately put stronger (by their judgement) competitors farther in the bracket from each other, and everything else...
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    Tournament Arcs?

    As long as it reasonably fits inside the narrative. It's usually best when participating and doing reasonably well is enough to accomplish any primary/critical goals. Then it can be unknown just how far they will really get into the tournament, beyond doing well enough that the story wouldn't...
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    How do you design iconic characters?

    I agree with Charles. Just make characters who feel alive and rich and vibrant. Fill them out. Make them People to your best ability. And then, maybe, if you are lucky, one of your characters will become iconic. ------------------ Alternatively, become a reasonably successful TTRPG...
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    Why don’t the monsters in your world attack cities often?

    "Monsters" aren't exactly a unified category of creatures, and by definition mostly means non-sapient creatures. Most of the time, it effectively means animalistic/aggressive/predatory but with magical abilities. They no more attack cities than bears attack cities in our world, but they are...
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    No, transformations aren't supposed to hurt! =P

    Well, I was thinking magical experiment, but more along the lines of "we want super-soldiers who can transform into giant monsters on command", and so they try to 'hack' the innate magic of other species to give them the results they want and then tack that magic onto people who may not be...
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