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No. But I have a feeling you're lacking subtlety. I dont think this character is one to say brazzen sexual innuendoes. so flushed cheeks, a tremor, and elevated heart rate would fit better. her condition can be misunderstood by the guy for fear for an extra layer of comedy

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there was this vore novel i read years ago. it's about men being absorbed (from below) by centaur women. the men find it the ultimate pleasure and the centaurs get stronger or some shit.

berserk shouldn't even be on this poll. it's in a league of its own

I like this guy's stuff https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55562/sexy-sect-babes https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/83080/sexy-steampunk-babes this has 1 character that's as you described the rest are fine https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/60032/alchimia-rex...

The first paragraph of the first chapter is arguablly the most important. If you cut the first part of this chapter out, i guarantee you would have found more success. It is what hooks the reader. What I read was exposition and descriptions that I cared very little about. My interest was peaked...

for series id have said broken empire or first law. for a standalone novel it's either empire of ants or manifest delusions. the first is from the prespective of an ant and it really is a phenomenal novel. the second is about delusions becoming reality, and the more delusional you are, the...

for qidian readers, you got away lightly

exclusive sites have to be aggressive to keep their exclusivity. they will contact sh or make some type of legal request. If you steal a successful novel from another site under a different name, his readers will find you and report you eventaully. there is no profit here unless this is...

that sucks man. here's another

just saw your ad on rr. i remember when you were brainstorming the novel here. congrats brother

wheres the bingo card