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  1. greyblob

    synopsis too big

    synopsis too big
  2. greyblob

    most random shit ever

    most random shit ever
  3. greyblob

    ye i dont think so bro

    ye i dont think so bro
  4. greyblob

    the sauce must flow

    the sauce must flow
  5. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    i wished it was an act. if its an act I'd have had hope she'd stop but no i got that its her personality. and i dislike it greatly screen doesn't infer a TV? how do i get to the mana crystal deduction when i get no information on it or the world? she spent hours giggling at them. I get if they...
  6. greyblob

    what is it about

    what is it about
  7. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    read up to: How to Break Into a Vault Without Even Trying mixed feelings here. I feel like you can structure a scene, depict a character and establish a plot but you're deliberately choosing not to. this mc is perhaps the most obnoxious character ive come across in a very long time. to start...
  8. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    i cant read this. genuinley cant. i dont know whats happening but the italic walls of text are fucking with my brain. i might be acoustic why is everything italic?
  9. greyblob

    Posted a series through the "Create" Dashboard, but it's not on my profile or the site to read - what gives?

    you need to reach out to the mod team. send them a few messages too dont stop at one. they recommend it because they get a lot of them and can miss some
  10. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    too JP LN style. id reckon it'll work better on SH than RR. or maybe not since it has no lewd tags. who knows
  11. greyblob

    youre welcome

    youre welcome
  12. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    @Assurbanipal_II post urs
  13. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    its better than the other one. more focused and there's a proper storyline/progression. comedy is decent. its still isekai slop which is fine but i think you'll hit an issue later on with how many different characters you want to introduce and maintain. good luck with the reaearch. i feel like...
  14. greyblob

    Do you use YCHs?

    wtf why am i only 10k. youre farming
  15. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    is this the same as the one above?
  16. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    read up to: Chapter 9.2: The Promise the most egregious thing in this novel is the cover and your avatar. it has that low-quality ai generated image that screams 2022 and it had me dreading to read this. I was expecting a flashbang of garabge ai generated writing but it never came. and you have...
  17. greyblob

    couldnt be me bro. id catch it with my face

    couldnt be me bro. id catch it with my face
  18. greyblob

    [IMG]

  19. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    once am done with the last two i have probably
  20. greyblob

    [OPEN 2/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

    read up to: Chapter 11: The Saint Tasked With Gathering The Six Heroes hmm hmm. writing quality is decent, the content itself leaves things to be desired. i actually don't dislike the characters as much as i thought i would. I hate shounen and mc is a bit mentally impaired as all shounen mcs...
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