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  1. RootBeerBert

    Where to draw the line on the complex powers?

    I'm having a conundrum. I'm not sure where to draw the limits on how strong and how complex I want to be with powers in my story. I feel if I make the powers too simple that aspect of my story will stay generic and forgettable while if I make things too complex things will get too complicated...
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    You got isekaid into your own novel

    Depending on how I’m Isekai’d I could either end up as vessel for half of the universe to incarnate itself in (A bad thing), a pawn for immature celestial beings, or get body dysmorphia. I don’t even wanna think about if any knew I’m the author.
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    Should I mention shoddy citations?

    I’ve finally finished up my ridiculously long summer work in the last two weeks of summer (procrastinating is my enemy), and now it’s time to submit it. The problem comes with citations. Since I was rushing like crazy, aside from writing page numbers on the side, I didn’t take citations into...
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    Limiting phone usage

    I have an issue with phone usage I want to fix, I'm on it way too much, to the point that I'm distracted from my summer work. I left it at a cousin's house to focus and it worked, but not having a way to contact me is problem for my family so I can't do it again and I'm getting distracted like I...
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    Miscellaneous facts about your characters

    My MC has sleepy, sort of creepy, looking eyes, so regardless of how much sleep she gets she perpetually looks tired.
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    How do you guys study?

    In the next few weeks I'll be heading into 11th grade and I'll be taking AP US History, my problem is that I don't know how to study, or rather how to study well. I've made it into AP partially because my teacher was on maternity leave so I was doing easier work, and partially because I'm decent...
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    What are your characters' flaws?

    Erica: Inferiority complex due to being the the only ordinary person in a family of geniuses and a lack of ambition because she only ever tried, and failed, to emulate her family’s talents. Neras: Due to the unique circumstances of his birth, formerly serving as he vessel for a reincarnator, he...
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    Eye Trade vs Eye Gift

    Anything is possible in fiction if you imagine hard enough, though seriously another main character’s ability, focused on forming links and connections with objects will help with it.
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    Eye Trade vs Eye Gift

    He, by this point in the story is the weakest member of the main cast with the least potential due to his unique heritage and the eye would open opportunities for him to progress. The donor’s heritage is more helpful as she’s given enhanced senses, to the point where she can see energy, but...
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    Eye Trade vs Eye Gift

    I’m thinking that one of my main characters loses his eye in a very traumatic battle and he’s given the Eye of his best friend/sister-figure, I’m pondering whether this should just be her giving her eye to him or them exchanging eyes. Originally I wanted them to trade eyes so that they’d be able...
  11. RootBeerBert

    How to properly describe a beautiful character?

    Say she has legs so long despite her height that she might as while be 2/3 legs, green rock like skin, and a face that puts Tinker Bell to shame, and constantly regurgitate how beautiful she is.
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    Do you intentionally skip chapters?

    If I ever get to the point of constantly wanting to skip chapters I usually just drop the story soon after. But if it’s just once in while I push through it.
  13. RootBeerBert

    [Poll] Regression or Transmigration

    Regression. While becoming the strongest and starting over is cool, I’m still mostly attached to my family and wouldn’t want to leave yet. Plus depending on the world I might never get to read web novels and manga again.
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    Skimming Tips

    Nope, physical.
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    Skimming Tips

    ;-;
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    Skimming Tips

    You guys got any tips for skimming textbook chapters? I've got 8 chapters/320+ pgs of a history textbook plus corresponding paragraph questions to do for summer work. Since I’m starting a bit late and am a chronic procrastinator I know with absolute certainty I can’t just read it so does anyone...
  17. RootBeerBert

    Drifting Friendships

    (2) and (4) sound like the only viable options for me, since I’ve been doing (1) most of my life and it sucks ass and (3) is way too difficult for me. Its gonna be a while before I get there...
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    Drifting Friendships

    I’m beginning to wonder what I’m going to about friends in the future. My friends and I are going to drift away at some point, we probably are right now. I used to think it’d be fine since I had a best friend who I definitely wouldn’t drift from, but looking back I didn’t. I’d mistaken my...
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