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  • Trying to get into stocks but apparently 5 bucks or 100.000VND is not worth anyone time and putting in buying commands always be met with error. This sum risky shit.
    J_Chemist
    J_Chemist
    It's better to invest into IRAs and long term holds rather than the short term. Unless you're really into that kind of stuff and pay very close attention to the market, you'll lose more than you make. At least with long term holdings, you have higher interest rates and can make out overtime.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    The Irish Republican Army?
    J_Chemist
    I sat down with the weak crackling light between the woods, just staring, ruining my perfectly bright vision bit by bit I'd assume. I curled and hug my own knees, entertaining myself while doubt covered my eyes, the cold air carressed my hair and the primordial fear of the unknown grabbed a hold of my conscience. I stomped the fire out and went to sleep also.
    I might actually donate to charity today because I haven't written anything and it's 9PM
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    If you do, good for you
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    That means I'll pay not to write? That sounds like ghostwriting to me people!
    Fuck it, for every day that i don't get any words in imma donate more money to charity, at least 133 words minimum. Because I hate starving children so this will definitely motivate me
    "In a great storm, sailors in ancient times invoked
    Neptune: O God! You will save or destroy me according to your will. But whatever you will, I
    will steer my ship as necessary!”
    Can anyone help me improve this sentence while keeping the structure?

    "Good," Emily chimed in, her hat started wiggling in spite of the lack of a breeze."

    Two uses of the word "of" near each other ticks me the wrong way.
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    Deleted member 84247
    Fluttering is good.
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    Deleted member 76176
    Right. I think depending on the information the author is trying to convey, it can be rewritten completely.
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    Deleted member 84247
    You don't have to say there was no wind if you use my second example and replace wiggling with fluttering. Or the third example and place wiggled with fluttered.
    I looked at him, tried to smile as always, but came off a bit passive aggressive:"I wish to never have this body again, and my spirit is broken, what's left of my identity is my mind, though I can not make bread from that."
    I got a stuffed nose abd imagine what if tomorrow both nose stuck and I die cant breath
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    Tsuru
    Now i think about it
    i had this less often since i use this "cleansing salt-water" product for nose

    Btw,
    never try to drink (liquids) big mouthfuls in this condition as you were gonna coincidentally take a breath
    bc you truly suffocate as your mouth is full/need to breath and cant

    High chance of coughing bc wrong trachea
    My cat acted strangely, yesterday he didn't want to eat what mom gave him, this morning he doesn't ask for food the first thing when my dad wake up (very out of character of him) and he's gone missing since the morning, no one could find him.

    I searchc for him under the beds, none, when I was down in the kitchen, I got just the instinct, I didn't know if it was animal instinct or not, to just "meow" and I heard ver
    People love pets because pets rely on them and never grow up to start their own family in Australia. Does that mean people actually love the idea that they're important?
    Cipiteca396
    Cipiteca396
    People love receiving unconditional love.

    Or bullying the weak.

    Some people also just keep pets because they think they're supposed to do that.

    So really, it is a good comparison to having kids... Except even with the moving to Australia, they still last longer than pets most of the time, soo...
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    Tsuru
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    Bonus : Humans have a inheritant desire to "control"
    some more, some less

    Often weak people becoming "great" is simply bc they dislike their "lack of control" hence craving strength
    (its like a poor family kid losing one parent bc no money, becoming rich later)

    And pets : superiority vs them and can control them
    My character never speak abbreviation, so how do I say don't you dare? "Do not you dare?"
    l8rose
    l8rose
    "Do not dare" is the non-contraction version of "don't you dare".
    MintiLime
    MintiLime
    I usually think of it as “stop that this instant!”
    Stealthy_Enigma
    Stealthy_Enigma
    You could make it a statement~

    *Folds arms (or puts hands on hips)* "You better not do that."

    --

    You know, I hear/use that phrase all the time, and now that I am writing it in words, it looks weird- grammatically, that is...

    ˝/\⁠⁠__/\˝
    (⁠⁠⁠✿⚆⁠.⚆⁠)
    /˙˙˙˙˙?\ *hmmmm*
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