LuoirM

LuoirM

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    I would either leave town covered in bruises or covered in handprints, and my fate was not in my control, in my will no more. Maybe, just maybe, it is like what I've once read of Michel de Montaigne: “In a great storm, sailors in ancient times invoked Neptune: O God! You will save or destroy me according to your will. But whatever you will, I will steer my ship as necessary!”
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    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Ohio.

    Florida would be more of Hải Phòng or sumin.
    Rhaps
    Rhaps
    Hải Phong is more like Detroit imo.
    And you're correct, your place is definitely more Ohio.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Florida is just on some different fucking spectrum I ain't able to compare.

    But, wild people with wild pets, probably somewhere in Tây Nguyên or Bắc Trung Bộ ig
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    Expectation: I didn't post anything after 3 days of trying
    Reality: I wrote 3000 words, it's just that the chapter's long, don't put yeself down.
    LuoirM
    There could be people I know in that crowd, people I've interacted with, people I've slept with. The thought alone humiliate a fragile-by-time soul like mine enough, the air was getting thicker, the voices were getting louder and my mind were getting filled with animated tangled strings.
    LuoirM
    Suggestion needed:
    Sound for continuous slapping, a woman bitchslapping another woman, but it goes on for a long time so it shouldn't sound too weird, should I use "tap" "slap" "bap" "chad"?
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    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Tonight pls daddy
    RepresentingWrath
    RepresentingWrath
    I'm on it.
    D
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    I don't think using onomatopoeia is a good idea. And even if you do use it, try something unique and perhaps make an analogy or metaphor to describe. Whatever you'd think would work better.
    LuoirM
    It was one of the happiest moment since I'm into town, even though everything leading up to that was insignificant for me to feel like that. And I should have guess that I was, just, a little, too happy, as I the moment went into hell.

    The door to the room slam open.
    LuoirM
    I fell down to my knees, accepting fate, accepting the fact that my legs were walking on its own towards an unnamed destiny.

    Maybe, just maybe, it is like what I've once read of Michel de Montaigne: “In a great storm, sailors in ancient times invoked Neptune: O God! You will save or destroy me according to your will. But whatever you will, I will steer my ship as necessary!”
    LuoirM
    Electricity went out, spent 20.000VNĐ for 3 hours to go to an internet cafe to write here, and holy shit they have the biggest monitor I've ever seen, liek triple the size of the laptop I've bene writing on
    LuoirM
    One of the stranger sentences I've wrote:
    "As the tide weakened with the grip of the feline's man"
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    Tsuru
    Tsuru
    As the tide weakened = The tide weaken with something else
    with the grip = so it weaken at same time as the grip of someone ?
    of the feling = a cat
    's man = the "male" of the cat?

    The tide of "something", weaken, while the grip of a male (cat) husband of a cat.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    The catboy grips and the tide of the water slow down
    Tsuru
    Tsuru
    A very very old golden sentence from a famous mangaka

    "A cat is fine too"
    LuoirM
    Real question: Are music considered entertainment during that doesn't disturb writing. Or should it be considered a part of the writing process itself?
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    J_Chemist
    J_Chemist
    What Hound said. Music can provide muse or set an emotional atmosphere if used properly. Otherwise, it'll just be a distraction.
    Tsuru
    Tsuru
    ^Didnt read other comments.

    Often seen western/eastern, authors mention the musics they listened to, while writing their stories.
    You could say "they are part of writing process"
    Tsuru
    Tsuru
    Because "the music help the brain imagine the scene they are writing" (sad song/sad scene)

    Also its similar to "using a image to inspirate from, to draw your own drawing/manga"
    Like thinking of berserk to draw a swordman with big sword or a ruthless MC
    LuoirM
    I managed to crank out an empty, boring, dry and tasteless joke that deserves my head cut clean off... Elu seems reluctant to conversate after that, of course, I just made a huge accusation, and I was starting to laugh at my own joke, like a mad woman, a crazy one, no one would laugh in this situation. But that laughter soon turn to cries, which was more in character of a human being.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    If it was a romance novel, Elu would have covered me with something, and I think he tried — The man looked around for something, even down at his own shirt, even looked back at the town — but it was just afternoon where it's scorching, no one would bring an extra jacket or wear two layers of shirt.
    RepresentingWrath
    RepresentingWrath
    What?
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Just sharin sumthin on my story
    LuoirM
    "He will be here, isn't he?"
    "Yes... The king-to-be of this country."
    "..............."
    "You don't have to see him."
    "No...," She continued "I will fucking kill him myself."
    "Our brother."
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    Tsuru
    Tsuru
    ??? : .....where am i.....its dark......
    Girls : Is he dead ? Probably, you turned him into a sieve
    ??? : this voices.......arent they from the 2 heroines of this novel i was reading.........cough......why am i cold.....wasnt i eating in a restaurant with my gf?

    [I transmigrated into a dying scum prince, and try to find my gf that also transmigrated into this isekai, which is a novel i read in my previous life]
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