I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

Here is my story. Looking forward to hearing back from you.

Tony hasn't approved it yet, but it should show up. Tried it in incognito.

I was in a big slump for a while, and couldn't stick to a single story for more than a few chapters. It was about December of last year that I really started sticking to this. It's been working out for a while, and I haven't lost interest.

This is mine.


Inspired by A silent voice, Re zero, and slightly Classroom of the Elite. SInce it's not a fantasy but a slice of life, it was more inspired by Re zero's thematic depth and character writing.

Would love some feedback on my Story.

All feedback is appreciated.

Looking forward to your opinion.

I took your advice and fixed the writing Format with this one I hope you like this one better!

I love Isekai and Magus stories and I wanted something similar, something grand, something that can go for thousands of chapters and this is my take.

Great Journey: Whims of Fate

Story ideas this guy Zack who 16 has super strength every fighting tournament he enter MMA,Boxing, etc he win he end alway accidentally killed his opponent in the first round he the campaign in all major fight tournament/event/sport.

Zack go to underground illegal fight rings where anything go and the fight are to the death where he can actually be challenged. He doesn’t feel bad about killing his opponent because they’re the wrost of the worst.

Zack does know how to fight and martial arts he can beat someone without his super strength.

Recently launched so worth a shot... what inspired me? Just a love of the genre and questions I wanted answers too I had not seen yet.