Recent content by Time4T

Just one more thing you'd need to adjust (or two depending on your starting point of view).

Who the fuck was the idiot that claimed this is mans world...

Admiration, real or pretend, used as a sales pitch is crap.

"Even though most say "they" want critical feedback..." I don't even like publicly correcting myself!

Even though most say want critical feedback, the more I think about it, the less comfortable I am giving it. Screw the typos. Not my job, not my place, not my problem. Positive reinforcement only. Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next... Author happy, Reader happy, done. I know I...

I get it. Tread lightly and be pretty damn sure before saying anything. Even then make it a suggestion, just in case. Honestly, if I say anything, I'd want a positive response before ever doing it again.

Pointing out typos seems a lot like the “Honey do I look fat in this dress?” question. Information wanted but… Sometimes the most helpful thing might be to ignore any imperfections and go with "you look great in anything”. I guess I'll just play it by ear.

Part of me thinks I might be helping proof read. On the other hand it feels like it could be taken as nit-picking. Is it helpful or annoying?

The male black widow is still risking his life to breed. Male birds dancing, displaying and providing all, to catch the eye of the female mate. Males compete to impress, females choose who won... And, at the end of the day, the lioness can still say no. Bigger, stronger and dominant, these roles...

A lot of Femdom stories feature dominant lesbian MC's and Futa as a stand-in for male equipment. So often it's more role replacement than reversal.

Your points on a social, political and financial matriarchy are vaid. But not so much sexually. I don't see the "story where the women chase the men" as in naosu question. Not to mistake "who's in charge" of sexually in our society, I already see that to be mostly females. The switch I think...

Plug your character into your weekly trip to the grocery store or helping you fold laundry. If you think they'd make those chores interesting and enjoyable, then you probably found it. A likable character can make up a lot for an advantage plot.

There needs to be an explanation for the role reversal and scarcity seems an easy one. There's other explanations. Having the females be physically stronger? Maybe a magical world, with only females being magical and needing to dominate a men to advance their magical potential. With men, now the...

The idea of magical subliminal advertising is cool. Since your question made me forewarned, I already knew what I was reading. So I'm not sure if I'd have figured it out from the excerpt offered alone. I think at least a vague sense that Jeremy feels something of the emphasis would help make the...

I may be an anomaly but I love long chapters. Especially if I'm current with the releases. Having to wait days inbetween 1500 word mini chapters is annoying, sometimes so much so that I'll drop out. Personaly, I like chapters to be a meal, not a snack. I'll likely take a look at your story just...