Hey, I have a problem with how my plotting of my Warhammer 40k fanfic has been going and I need your opinion
So I am using kishotenketsu plotting for my volume and said volume is made up of kishotenketsu mini plots, this mostly because I had a lack of content and ideas to write about
and...
That makes sense, no wonder my chapters felt a bit too jammed-packed, like there was too much action or maybe that's one of my strengths.
Here a link please tell me what you think
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/167517/i-got-reincarnated-as-a-zerg/
Can please get a review as am not sure where to improve, and oh ya can you please tell what I should do when I finsh writing a chapter and I read a it and then I feel like I can do better?
I got reincarnated as a Zerg
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/167517/i-got-reincarnated-as-a-zerg/
I wanted to ask what do you do when you are writing a chapter and you read it and it doesn't sound or feel right.
Like it is subpar form the last chapters