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I read the opening of chapter 1 and the opening of chapter 6. Focusing on the opening because that is where description is most...

Day 16

Lady Luck. When she smiles upon you, even dog poop is gold. I have always hated the concept of luck, but it sure does exist... All one...

No problem! Its an interesting start! I think if you tighten it up a bit you'll hook readers hard.

Thank you very much for the feedback. 🫂 Glad you still liked it.

Overall, not bad at all! But, I have some issues with the prose. There's a few too many "fluff" words that get in the way of the action...

Well, first of all, thank you for taking the time. I read the first 2 chapters of your story, and there's a lot to work on. I'm not sure...

Regarding prose... it's ok To give an feedback on a whole story I need more stuff. As time being the scene is good 3.3/5 - enjoyment...

Hello, kind people. I'm currently writing a little story, but I'm not sure whether the direction I'm going in, both technically and...

Sorry, but i still dont understand, do you think I'm trying to advertise myself with my username? Cause if that's the case i can tell...

Well, I don't really have a synopsis yet, so I'll just drop my first chapter here. Many thanks for considering my request. One thing I'm...

Hey. Do you also take single-chapter excerpts, since I haven't published any story yet?

Yes!!

A black hole?

I kept trying to draw the face but it just... I just couldn't do it.