Recent content by HydraScribe_1

As the title say, am I doing too little of 'Show dont tell' ? I have been going over and over the first 20 chapters editing daily (yes, im that kind of person who gets the itch as soon as i feel something is wrong). Can you please read however many paragraphs / chapters you want, and tell me if...

Lol nah, it was like just put the languages in a blender and see what I get. :ROFLMAO:

Loll they are French, Arabic and a local that sounds and writes suspiciously like ancient Greek lmaoooo :LOL:

Man i keep missing these. Being a new author with english as fourth language is pretty hard *Cries* T_T

Ahh late yet to another awesome reviewer T_T

Thank you Kurayami <3

Hello, new author here. I am not sure if this is fine, my work is written by me. I used gpt to spot grammatical only as english isnt my first language. If that is fine, please review my work and give me any constructive feedback so I can get better. If not, sorry for the bother and have a wonder...

Hi! Im a new author so any feedback is much appreciated. Thanks.

wow this is soo much detailed that im shocked and happy at same time. Thank you for spending time from your precious day to view it again. I especially liked that idea of someone walking in. As to not break the established narrative (since the next 4 chapters are mostly about the hook and her...

I just did a low to medium edit to ch1. If you are still interested on checking it out. What I focused on: I tried to adding more thoughts, and more grounding, physical 'touch' to the narrative and pacing. please let me know if these problems are still visible <3

oh? so you suggest to redraft it instead? I honestly though i should leave it as is as to not confused others but I believe redrafting might be a better solution then hoping new readers will give the read a few more chapters... Thanks again Ps: I will reply to you here when im done. Finishing...

Great! thats exactly what i wanted tbh. As I said Im very novice as an author (Literally the most i did was translating two novels lol). So i said i was moving in blind lmao. Imma call the problems pointed out 1-4. For 2 and 3. I have (i believe) fixed the issue in the upcoming chapters...

Hello I'm a new author here, and I’d really love some feedback on my story. Thanks

Im writing a cultivation novel with a system. Can someone give me some feedback on it? I have written upto chapter 97 but publicly only posted upto 21 as of yet. Need some feedback on it as so far, and as a new author, im walking in the dark lmao Villainess of Stolen Destinies