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    Came for the titts stayed for the story ???

    We know Katara likely used blood bending while she was married to Aang.
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    Came for the titts stayed for the story ???

    My book Game Master in another world might suit what you are looking for, definitely no harem nor is the main focus romance. There are a couple of sex scenes (Optional 2 versions of same chapter), but it certainly isn't the main focus. It does have a little gender bending, not in the usual...
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    Uggggh. Cringe.

    My rule of thumb, if the person is glazing you, they are likely trying to scam you. I've had several saying my story is absolutely amazing. I know for a fact this is not true. I did an email exchange with one and found out they were from Pakistan, yet claiming to be from USA. They are likely...
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    What does your insights breakdown look like?

    From dashboard click on stats, and then insights.
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    What does your insights breakdown look like?

    What I found curious were the other countries, like Russia etc. I would have guessed a book written in English would have had not as many non English readers.
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    What does your insights breakdown look like?

    I'm curious as to what others country breakdowns look like. You can find mine attached.
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    Deleting chapters

    I deleted my first chapter, and moved small elements into the second. On reflection the info dump was unnecessary and not grabbing people.
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    Writing How to handle 20 year montage

    I'm planning to have a chapter span 20 years with not too much happening, what I'm debating though is how to handle it. The book is a first person perspective of an invisible observer. This will be largely watching a child grow up from year 0 and become an adult in a medieval style village set...
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    Writing Prompt Your D&D group wake up as their characters

    Your D&D group wakes up as their characters and your DM is now the campaign’s villain. How do you all survive modern life (and each other) with magic and mundane bureaucracy standing in the way?
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    Writing I have one chapter to make my wife cry

    Well, I failed to achieve my goal, she just didn't care enough about the character, I've released the 2 chapters anyhow, it was going to be too big being one chapter.
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    I would love some constructive criticism. I have my wife review, but she isn't interested in the story, it could be because it is boring, or, just not her kind of story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1920164/game-master-in-another-world/
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    Three's the charm free feedback thread. (Closed.)

    Hi don't suppose you could take a look at my book so far: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1920164/game-master-in-another-world/ I'm still trying to find my writing style a little.
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    Writing I have one chapter to make my wife cry

    Indeed, I'm looking at the stories that have made her cry in the past, as inspiration.
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    4 Chapters in, writing fifth, keen for some more feedback.

    Thanks to your feedback I reckon I've solved the issue, I've deleted chapter 1, and just put a flashback to what was in chapter 1, chapter 1 was completely unnecessary.
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    4 Chapters in, writing fifth, keen for some more feedback.

    I've never heard about that comic book, interesting
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