Recent content by FrenzyWanderer

Thank you! The thing I most struggle with descriptions is having a "flow" in it... Like what to describe in what order As I realized there are types of descroptions For example let's see the cave example Things to describe are as you said, Darkness, stillness and quiteness. I can identify...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Hi everyone! This is my first novel, many people pointed that earlier chapters lack description and detailing and was like a script of a play So I tried to change the style a bit, from...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Chapter 06 uploaded, tried my best to write on some descriptions, but the thing was dialogue heavy... so this was all what I could muster, I think it's better than last chapters. Just can...

Actually the problem was I was reading a lot of LNs recently and grown used to it :blob_sweat: I have read english novels mostly during childhood, but recently, all the novels I have read since then are LNs Now I kinda feel reading long paragraphs boring. Now If I go on writing with the flow...

Yeah the problem is that I assumed LN like style was a 'Style of writing' not a 'bad style of writing' I've reading lot of LNs recently and I like reading LNs that's probably why my style had gone like this I mean does those kind of sentences belong only in action scenes or high stakes scenes...

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As a new Author I struggle a lot with balancing these 2, I have written a novel in SH https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ But I got 2-3 feedbacks saying too little detail and hard to follow. And my writing style tend to...

Sorry... only 4,300 words Sorry I'll post next week after writing 10k words

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Mine too please :blob_teary: Also I still couldn't find the way to edit individual chapters, I desperately need to edit ch01 and ch02, there are few puntual mistakes there. 5 chapters up!

Yeah, the problem is fixed from Ch 04 onwards I don't know how to edit previous chapters. Can you plz help me? Should I delete the story and start on again? How to edit single chapters Which are already published I've also published this on RR too, I fixed there, but here I can't find an...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ I uploaded my novel, I got 3 readers and 2 favourites and around 50 views (idk but when I click chapters it shows only 7 views, I guess views doesnot equal read) in one day. is my story...

Thank you so much!!! :s_smile: Finally got a proper review Wait I used a different software to write ch04, not microsoft word Holy crap! There might be a issue after copying into the text editor here Thank you again for pointing out

Regarding prose... it's ok To give an feedback on a whole story I need more stuff. As time being the scene is good 3.3/5 - enjoyment But the problem is some areas it's not clear to me. Like was the prince being poisoned or something? Like in this bit Later he is chased by some sort of a...

Thank you, did you read until chapter 04, since I kind of messed up in the pre isekai part. Because I wrote them hastily to publish Did you think ch01 and ch02 are bad? Compared to second scene of chapter 03 and chapter 04 Fixed the fullstop (.) From chapter 04 Thank you so much again for...

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