Read some of my Highschool writing. Quite bad, more summary than intrigue, immersion, or action. Like someone was poorly giving you a rundown of a movie they watched. I was however more playful in my writing then in my current work. However I got that out of my system, for the moment, with the Insomnia Experiment, so it is not like I lost that quality.

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