Few completely unrelated thoughts I wanna say/ask about. First, does anyone one else default to ya instead of you in casual speech?
Second, when telling a story that isn’t a slice of life comedy, your character’s actions/choices need to have consequences.
Third, when listening to music, there is at least two modes. Listening to the story that that music is telling, and listening to the music as the relationship

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