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Hmm, thank you for taking your time with this, I will think about the formatting again. Greatly appreciated. ?

Hmmm ty for the feedback, I appreciate it. I will try to think out a new synopsis. And may re-order my chapters too! I will also try to edit the earlier chapters again to explain things better. Thank you again!

Thank you, may you become the pirate king.

greyblob the pirate slime, will you send me the one piece as well?

If you don't mind still reviewing. For the cover, I am bad at designing, and I tried using AI to make character but it just doesn't convey what I want my character to look like, so I gave up. For the story, this is a dark epic fantasy novel, although starting out slowly...

Sees pfp, one is daikon, one is banana. food wars? (wait that's a different show...) :blob_hmm: :sweating_profusely::blob_popcorn:

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Not defending TheTrinary, guys you should have seen his review, his review might seem brutal but if you can't take the brutality, better not submit your chapter for his review. I myself have my chapter 1 shredded by him, I don't think he even read my chapter completely to the end. He has his...

Thank you for your kind feedback! Somehow I have some trouble reading italics from normal font, so I used color to differentiate. I will try to find out and remove more redundancy. The slime reference might be a filler since the character will only appear way down the lines. :blobrofl: I will...

Thank you in advance for your glorious feedback! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1059845/esmeria/

Wow!!! I never really thought of this, but you are right! Can you say a drummer in a band is akin to a conductor in an orchestra? :blob_popcorn:

ლ(ಠ益ಠლ) I don't laugh much, but this reaction cracks me up so hard I actually laughed out.

Wow thank you for the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it! I have been using grammarly and chatgpt to edit my grammar as my english isn't good. I will take note of your comment and edit my chapters again! I changed my color coding twice before, I shall change it again, this time...

I will take you up on this offer! Thank you in advance! It's genre is dark fantasy! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1059845/esmeria/

Here is my first novel, thank you in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1059845/esmeria/