need feedback please

[Zenomew]

I have just published an experimental story and would like some constructive criticism. I would really appreciate if anyone here would take some time and look into it.
Thank you in advance!

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[daight]

There's 9 active feedback threads, post your novel there.

 

[melchi]

You should make a cover for it. That was my first impression.