If you have time, can you please take a look at my book?

[c37]

I've recently edited and revamped my prologue, chapter 1,2,3 and want to know if the plot is engaging or not.

I would appreciate it if anybody decides to give it a try and provide feedback. B*stard of Abaddon. Warning: This contains sensitive themes that may trigger a few people.

 

[Rosica]

Not a fans of genres in title and what to expect in synopsis. That alone is enough to make most of SH readers ignore your story.

 

[c37]

Not a fans of genres in title and what to expect in synopsis. That alone is enough to make most of SH readers ignore your story.

Then what should I do to fix it?

 

[Rosica]

Then what should I do to fix it?

If your synopsis already cover what the readers need to know about your story, you won't need those things. I'm not the expert in synopsis.

Try asking for a focused feedback for your synopsis from veterans here and they might respond. One of our admin @Tempokai are one of those. See if you can get his input.

 

[c37]

If your synopsis already cover what the readers need to know about your story, you won't need those things. I'm not the expert in synopsis.

Try asking for a focused feedback for your synopsis from veterans here and they might respond. One of our admin @Tempokai are one of those. See if you can get his input.

Okay, thank you for replying.

 

[Eldoria]

Not a fans of genres in title and what to expect in synopsis. That alone is enough to make most of SH readers ignore your story.

Sis... you're not suggesting OP change his story into smut, genben, futa, and other audience-favorite genres, are you?

 

[Bimbanana]

Not a fans of genres in title and what to expect in synopsis. That alone is enough to make most of SH readers ignore your story.

Well you can just easily erase the genres on title like what my beloved cold queen said. But keep it as is on RR

By the way, i skim reads some of your early chapters, you had done some rewrites based on some feedbacks.

I think what you need to do now is stop asking for feedbacks. You have quite decent characters, world, and plots.
More inputs would only make you lose direction.

Better if you focused on keep writing more chapters on the Bystard of Abaddon until it reach 50 chaps and see how the stats after.

Edit: Yes, Bystard of Abaddon because it looks like a Y

 

[Rosica]

Sis... you're not suggesting OP change his story into smut, genben, futa, and other audience-favorite genres, are you?

Genres in title. Not genres. All genres have place in SH.

B*stard of Abaddon | Dark fantasy | Slave MC | Necromancer progression

Those things.

You can't read.

 

[c37]

Well you can just easily erase the genres on title like what my beloved cold queen said. But keep it as is on RR

By the way, i skim reads some of your early chapters, you had done some rewrites based on some feedbacks.

I think what you need to do now is stop asking for feedbacks. You have quite decent characters, world, and plots.
More inputs would only make you lose direction.

Better if you focused on keep writing more chapters on the Bystard of Abaddon until it reach 50 chaps and see how the stats after.

My original plan was this, but a sharp drop in readers in chapter 2 made me question my choice of character switch. I felt that it was taking away the mystery and driving the plot away. That is why I've re-written 2,3 chatpers. Thank you for replying. Liberator Orc.

 

[Rosica]

My original plan was this, but a sharp drop in readers in chapter 2 made me question my choice of character switch. I felt that it was taking away the mystery and driving the plot away. That is why I've re-written 2,3 chatpers.

Sharp drop of readers/views are normal. People read your first chapter, they decide to wait until your story is bingeable until they return and read the rest. This usually take like 50 chapters.

 

[c37]

Sharp drop of readers/views are normal. People read your first chapter, they decide to wait until your story is bingeable until they return and read the rest. This usually take like 50 chapters.

Okay, I'll move forward with the 18th chapter then, thank you for your suggestions.

Well you can just easily erase the genres on title like what my beloved cold queen said. But keep it as is on RR

By the way, i skim reads some of your early chapters, you had done some rewrites based on some feedbacks.

I think what you need to do now is stop asking for feedbacks. You have quite decent characters, world, and plots.
More inputs would only make you lose direction.

Better if you focused on keep writing more chapters on the Bystard of Abaddon until it reach 50 chaps and see how the stats after.

Edit: Yes, Bystard of Abaddon because it looks like a Y

It was a design choice, my bad. I made the asterisk to look more like the horns of MC.