New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

[FrenzyWanderer]

Stuck at Level 1 by Choice — Don’t Ask My Sister How She Feels About It

Most people, upon reincarnating into a fantasy world with a tragic backstory and a system, would grab a sword and start grinding levels. Ren Ashford is not most people. Armed with the memories of a former high schooler who have played far too many games (Both video games and in...

www.scribblehub.com

4 chapters uploaded... 5th will follow soon
Feel free to dessimate the story, Dismantle it, completely destroy or anything!

Advices regarding how to improve the craft are highly appreciated

 

[Bimbanana]

Uh not good, your AI is leaking everywhere. (I use AI helps too)
But yours, it seems you didnt bother to recheck it again.

 

[FrenzyWanderer]

Thank you
Uploaded a draft, mostly to check how the things going on

On the viewer tab I didn't see any views, Did you read it? @Bimbanana

And I just used AI to create the cover image, Do you know any other way?

 

[Bimbanana]

Yeah, read it and i even chat with the scam bot on your comment section. I miss those fellows, they never bother to came to me again
PS: Dunno why you dont know this, but the updates on SH isnt real time

Also. Naaahh your AI rewrite is everywhere especially on your chapter 2.
If you really want to hide and deny it, then its better if you dont ask for a review if you just looking for validation

Toodle do~

 

[c37]

Thank you
Uploaded a draft, mostly to check how the things going on

On the viewer tab I didn't see any views, Did you read it? @Bimbanana

And I just used AI to create the cover image, Do you know any other way?

The only way to develop your writing style is to write more chapters without using AI. I used to use AI in the beginning. But now I stopped, I've written around 17 chapters, and I believe I developed some malformed fetus of my writing style that conveys my AI's absence.

Stuck at Level 1 by Choice — Don’t Ask My Sister How She Feels About It

Most people, upon reincarnating into a fantasy world with a tragic backstory and a system, would grab a sword and start grinding levels. Ren Ashford is not most people. Armed with the memories of a former high schooler who have played far too many games (Both video games and in...

www.scribblehub.com

4 chapters uploaded... 5th will follow soon
Feel free to dessimate the story, Dismantle it, completely destroy or anything!

Advices regarding how to improve the craft are highly appreciated

Hey man, just a heads up. I am getting 404 when I click on the link.

 

[Bimbanana]

Hey man, just a heads up. I am getting 404 when I click on the link.

IT WASNT ME I SWEAR

 

[eagle_360]

Did ya delete your story, I wanted to click on it. Scallywag.

 

[c37]

Did ya delete your story, I wanted to click on it. Scallywag.

I am stealing this.

 

[FrenzyWanderer]

Yeah, read it and i even chat with the scam bot on your comment section. I miss those fellows, they never bother to came to me again
PS: Dunno why you dont know this, but the updates on SH isnt real time

Also. Naaahh your AI rewrite is everywhere especially on your chapter 2.
If you really want to hide and deny it, then its better if you dont ask for a review if you just looking for validation

Toodle do~

Sorry... didn't mean to deny using AI for writing

And I just used AI to create the cover image, Do you know any other way?

I meant to ask how to create a cover page, I just used AI image generator for cover image, I wanted to ask is there any other way?
Sorry!

I didn't mean to deny the fact that I used AI for writing,

It was an error from my side in phrasing the sentence

The problem was, In my previous draft chapter 04 is actual chapter 01 (After being isekaiied) I didn't write Pre- Isekai story yet. So I scribbled something real quick, Mostly AI

So if it doesnot update in real time then when does it do?

I'll reupload the story soon after some fixes

Sorry I didn't know how to delete individual chapters, so deleted the whole story

 

[Bimbanana]

Well... now i feel bad

If you want to delete a chapter, you can go to stats then table of contents. Over there you can see every chapters more easily. Edit, delete, moved chapter position etc

I just used AI image generator for cover image, I wanted to ask is there any other way?

Well, pay artist if you had money, if not then AI it is. Btw your cover looked warped, you need to resized it again.

So if it doesnot update in real time then when does it do?

Dunno, can be hours, only gods and Tony knows. That's why i usually check it daily.

Welp, sorry for the misunderstanding then

*Bow politely*

 

[FrenzyWanderer]

Well... now i feel bad

If you want to delete a chapter, you can go to stats then table of contents. Over there you can see every chapters more easily. Edit, delete, moved chapter position etc


Well, pay artist if you had money, btw your cover looked warped, you need to resized it again.


Dunno, can be hours, only gods and Tony knows. That's why i usually check it daily.

Welp, sorry for the misunderstanding then

*Bow politely*

It's ok, the problem was from my side

Thank you!

I'm planning this to be a bit of a shorter story aiming for like 100 chapters, not more that that

 

[FrenzyWanderer]

Well... now i feel bad

If you want to delete a chapter, you can go to stats then table of contents. Over there you can see every chapters more easily. Edit, delete, moved chapter position etc


Well, pay artist if you had money, if not then AI it is. Btw your cover looked warped, you need to resized it again.


Dunno, can be hours, only gods and Tony knows. That's why i usually check it daily.

Welp, sorry for the misunderstanding then

*Bow politely*

I refuse to level up! (Don’t ask about my sister’s opinion on this)

What would any normal person do after they isekai'ed to another world? Well that shouldn't even be a question. Grind up levels, become strong and conquer the world with overpowered cheat abilities. But Ren isn't that kind of 'Normal' What if he conquers the world without levelling up? without...

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Reuploaded it, Still pre isekai part feels bit iffy