blackcrowcrowd
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Basically this but targeted: (Will try to still assess which part is good though)
FORMAT (Read carefully~)
{using these means just replace it entirely}
{Insert your introduction... kind of. Mention both my title and your title. See example for what I'm talking about, and yes, I added this because it's more enjoyable for me. The more original your introduction is, the happier I would probably be, so my feedbacks will also be much, much more superior. It's just a couple words, but it might just make my day.}
{Story title}
Feedback type: {Talk about what kind of feedback do you want. For example: Your cover, your blurb, your grammar, your writing, your dialogue, your litRPG system, etc.. Saying in general will not be accepted. Also, if you say in general you probably mean how enjoyable it is, which is quite subjective, which kinda sucks. There are a lot of famous stories that I do not enjoy, so it would be redundant.)
Expected length: {Normal or Detailed. Detailed here simply means that I will also be scouring through your work to find anything that made me feel uncomfortable in your story.}
{A link to your story}
EXAMPLE:
Greetings, fellow daoists. I am urrently in need of testers for my "poison" I call My Big Chungus Life as the Big Chungus. For those who are willing to write a detailed review of the poison's effects, I will grant 50 spiritual stones.
Sincerely, Sect Master of Purple Void Palace, Chen Yuegong.
Attached:
Ryn of Avonside
Feedback type: Cover and blurb
Expected length: Normal
www.scribblehub.com
NOTE
I might spend either 5 seconds, 5 minutes, or 50 minutes for the feedback depending on my mood, my availability, how good your story is, and what kind of feedback you're going to ask.
Also, if there's already 3 pending stories that I haven't reviewed yet, DO NOT POST MORE. It's gonna start feeling like work and it's shit. And if it's shit my feedback will be shit. And then you will also feel like shit because I shit on your story for no reason. For that, DO NOT POST MORE. Thank you.
A little bit of this fellow reader
I am a chinese (translated) webnovel addict, spending most of my time reading stories or staring in silence waiting for my favorite stories to update. My current preferences vary, from romance to action, from anti-trope to wishfulfillment, BUT they all have one thing in common: No non-consensual s-xual acts. That's it. Just don't give me a rapey rapey story and we're bros.
Currently in the mood for: System-based stories. I want to bash your formatting, hehe.
*may change accordingly
FORMAT (Read carefully~)
{using these means just replace it entirely}
{Insert your introduction... kind of. Mention both my title and your title. See example for what I'm talking about, and yes, I added this because it's more enjoyable for me. The more original your introduction is, the happier I would probably be, so my feedbacks will also be much, much more superior. It's just a couple words, but it might just make my day.}
{Story title}
Feedback type: {Talk about what kind of feedback do you want. For example: Your cover, your blurb, your grammar, your writing, your dialogue, your litRPG system, etc.. Saying in general will not be accepted. Also, if you say in general you probably mean how enjoyable it is, which is quite subjective, which kinda sucks. There are a lot of famous stories that I do not enjoy, so it would be redundant.)
Expected length: {Normal or Detailed. Detailed here simply means that I will also be scouring through your work to find anything that made me feel uncomfortable in your story.}
{A link to your story}
EXAMPLE:
Greetings, fellow daoists. I am urrently in need of testers for my "poison" I call My Big Chungus Life as the Big Chungus. For those who are willing to write a detailed review of the poison's effects, I will grant 50 spiritual stones.
Sincerely, Sect Master of Purple Void Palace, Chen Yuegong.
Attached:
Ryn of Avonside
Feedback type: Cover and blurb
Expected length: Normal
Ryn of Avonside
Elias and friends thought it was just a storm, everyone at Avonside University did, but when the clouds cleared and the sky was revealed again, they were met with a strange sky. Gone were the city lights and everything beyond the limits of their campus, replaced by a mountain wilderness....
NOTE
I might spend either 5 seconds, 5 minutes, or 50 minutes for the feedback depending on my mood, my availability, how good your story is, and what kind of feedback you're going to ask.
Also, if there's already 3 pending stories that I haven't reviewed yet, DO NOT POST MORE. It's gonna start feeling like work and it's shit. And if it's shit my feedback will be shit. And then you will also feel like shit because I shit on your story for no reason. For that, DO NOT POST MORE. Thank you.
A little bit of this fellow reader
I am a chinese (translated) webnovel addict, spending most of my time reading stories or staring in silence waiting for my favorite stories to update. My current preferences vary, from romance to action, from anti-trope to wishfulfillment, BUT they all have one thing in common: No non-consensual s-xual acts. That's it. Just don't give me a rapey rapey story and we're bros.
Currently in the mood for: System-based stories. I want to bash your formatting, hehe.
*may change accordingly
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