? New Fantasy Novel – I Will Never Let Her Suffer Again

[L1aei]

Another new member with virtually no grasp of the English language who calls people "bro" or "brother" in every other post. A couple days ago he said he was going to stop posting on here because he had to go back to school, and then lo and behold, this guy appears.

What's your fearest genres you ever read?

So basically, I have two genres that I mostly feared, Horror and Romance. Horror always make my soul leaves my body without any warning. For example, you were reading it until the scary part came like "It's staring at (MC). It never leaves. It stalks at (MC), ignoring the time". Yea, I don't...

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Firestorm feels different from this thread's fella; I am almost confident they are two different... entities.

 

[Macha]

Firestorm feels different from this thread's fella; I am almost confident they are two different... entities.

Firestorm feels like one of those degenerate from Retard Road (courtesy of Kusa and PW, thank you Kusa for inventing this term and PW for reintroducing it) who wished to be in the Eipstein's list but wasn't invited.

 

[SilentEcho]

nice ~~~ Congrats

 

[Deleted member 266]

If OP want to fuck with readers, why come to [Author General]?

Just stay in [Reader General].

Why piss in a wind storm?

 

[L1aei]

Why piss in a wind storm?

Ever watched Twister before?

 

[Luqu]

It seems you were never writing the story in the first place. You were either writing a draft and letting the AI make the finished product, or worse, you were just prompting the AI.

If you are serious about writing, scrap everything you have posted and start again, with your own words. Use AI to check your grammar if you must, but do not copy-paste the result. Fix your own mistakes and learn from them.

For this I will say no. I swear the whole story was my idea and even I wrote I just asked ai if there any mistakes and setted it then I thought it will know as ai novel so I removed some words even checked in google grammar that check if it's full ai or not. So I thought the chapters are good so posted. But I want continue because story is going good. I want end even all hates it I want all to see the story the is different. So I don't want to give up but I will stop getting fake likes and comments ok. Now public only give me views for it. If there get interested in this story

 

[Alski]

I swear the whole story was my idea and even I wrote I just asked ai if there any mistakes and setted it then I thought it will know as ai novel so I removed some words even checked in google grammar that check if it's full ai or not.

I hope you eventualy find out the irony in that

 

[Wamba2K]

For this I will say no. I swear the whole story was my idea and even I wrote I just asked ai if there any mistakes and setted it then I thought it will know as ai novel so I removed some words even checked in google grammar that check if it's full ai or not. So I thought the chapters are good so posted. But I want continue because story is going good. I want end even all hates it I want all to see the story the is different. So I don't want to give up but I will stop getting fake likes and comments ok. Now public only give me views for it. If there get interested in this story

I read it. It reads like a script. Is that intentional? Or was ChatGPT feeling especially lazy.
Example Ig:

Lyria: “Don’t move.”

Meer slowly opened his eyes. He saw white sheets, wooden walls, sunlight, and a familiar ceiling.

Meer: “…Home?”

Lyria’s hands glowed faintly blue-green as healing water flowed into his chest. Her eyes were red and swollen.

Lyria: “Do you know how close you were? Do you know what you did to us?”

Meer: “…Good morning to you too, Mom.”

Tears spilled down her cheeks. She pressed her forehead against his chest and shook.

Lyria: “I almost lost you. I’m your mother before I’m a healer. Don’t ever forget that.”

Meer: “I won’t.”

The door burst open.

Aliya: “BROTHER—!”

She rushed in, eyes red and face wet, wrapping herself around his arm.

Aliya: “You’re stupid! Idiot! Reckless! If you die again, I’ll kill you myself!”

Meer: “That sounds… painful.”

 

[Luqu]

I read it. It reads like a script. Is that intentional? Or was ChatGPT feeling especially lazy.
Example Ig:

Lyria: “Don’t move.”

Meer slowly opened his eyes. He saw white sheets, wooden walls, sunlight, and a familiar ceiling.

Meer: “…Home?”

Lyria’s hands glowed faintly blue-green as healing water flowed into his chest. Her eyes were red and swollen.

Lyria: “Do you know how close you were? Do you know what you did to us?”

Meer: “…Good morning to you too, Mom.”

Tears spilled down her cheeks. She pressed her forehead against his chest and shook.

Lyria: “I almost lost you. I’m your mother before I’m a healer. Don’t ever forget that.”

Meer: “I won’t.”

The door burst open.

Aliya: “BROTHER—!”

She rushed in, eyes red and face wet, wrapping herself around his arm.

Aliya: “You’re stupid! Idiot! Reckless! If you die again, I’ll kill you myself!”

Meer: “That sounds… painful.”

So what are you trying to say man.

But I don't care about anything because now I am getting support in my story you can this time it's not fake and I swear on my mom . I just want complete the story, which is in my mind and it's public wish to read my story or not I don't care about
If I am getting support I am happy if not too I will complete the story and end I will not write novel next. If people want I will continue.

 

[L1aei]

...now I am getting support in my story you can this time it's not fake and I swear on my mom .

A fraud getting scammed... oh the karmic irony.

 

[Wamba2K]

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A fraud getting scammed... oh the karmic irony.

Yeah. What is going on today? I've gotten like ten bot comments in an hour.

 

[Alski]

Yeah. What is going on today? I've gotten like ten bot comments in an hour.

India found SH.

 

[L1aei]

Yeah. What is going on today? I've gotten like ten bot comments in an hour.

No idea. I saw this Mods HELP! and I guess it must be a holiday wherever these sorts of folk are centralized.

 

[Wamba2K]

No idea. I saw this Mods HELP! and I guess it must be a holiday wherever these sorts of folk are centralized.

Bot Christmas?

 

[CountVanBadger]

Reading what Wamba2k just shared only makes me even more suspicious. The way you write in the forums makes me feel like I'm having a stroke, but your story is extremely generic, but at least legible.

What's with the insane drop in quality? Either the story was written by somebody/something else, or you care so little about how you come across in the forums that you're putting absolutely no effort into making yourself understood.

 

[Arkus86]

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A fraud getting scammed... oh the karmic irony.

That's one hurtful way to dash someone's hopes and dreams, and save their wallet.

Reading what Wamba2k just shared only makes me even more suspicious. The way you write in the forums makes me feel like I'm having a stroke, but your story is extremely generic, but at least legible.

What's with the insane drop in quality? Either the story was written by somebody/something else, or you care so little about how you come across in the forums that you're putting absolutely no effort into making yourself understood.

By their own admission, the story is (re)written by AI to get rid of errors due to poor English, and slightly edited to not be as obvious to AI checkers.

 

[Luqu]

Ok bro ? there are bots ok. I am not a good writer I know but at least I am telling truth that I only used ai for my grammar mistakes and sentences because people will see who don't like grammar mistakes and sentences. So it came that way but I swear the story writing and idea is mine

 

[CountVanBadger]

By their own admission, the story is (re)written by AI to get rid of errors due to poor English, and slightly edited to not be as obvious to AI checkers.

I just find it weird that he has access to an AI that will do that for him, but he only uses it for his story. Why not run his forum posts through it? If I were trying to advertise my book to people who didn't speak my native language, the first thing I'd do is make sure I'm not speaking gibberish.

 

[L1aei]

@Tony At this point, we're just dogpiling with no whistle being blown to end the play. I'm bored with this fraud.

 

[Alski]

I just find it weird that he has access to an AI that will do that for him, but he only uses it for his story. Why not run his forum posts through it? If I were trying to advertise my book to people who didn't speak my native language, the first thing I'd do is make sure I'm not speaking gibberish.

He used it for the first post in this thread and we called him out on use it