I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]

[Failnot]

What it says in the title

I'm pretty new to this, but I think I can still be of some use

I'll try to give meaningful and constructive feedback

 

[foxes]

Once again, no one showed up for the flash mob in yellow and blue T-shirts.

 

[Failnot]

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I suffer from blindness to all threads ever I need the links placed in front of me or I can't find them

 

[Wamba2K]

Link???
My goat doesn't need feedback because he's goated. But you can read some of the junk in my signature if you want.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

The Supernatural Case of an Accidental Time Traveler Volume 1

Ever consider going back in time? Is it on purpose and to a specific time? Well, not this time in The Supernatural Case of an Accidental Time Traveler. This story is the first in a series of time-travel escapades with various supernatural and mythological undertones scattered throughout the...

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If you don't mind, I would love any feedback you can give. Thank you!

 

[lerasycamore]

hi! i'd love some feedback, i'm only starting out as well so i'd be grateful for any reviews

The Scum Warlord Stabbed Me In The Back [BL]

The barren steppes of Wildfields had, for decades, been roamed by the Kingless Knights — remnants of the once-great broken empire. Now, they recognized no king, but chose their own High Warlord to lead them. To be chosen was to be acknowledged as the mightiest, the keenest, the one fit to...

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[Vivid_dreams]

What it says in the title

I'm pretty new to this, but I think I can still be of some use

I'll try to give meaningful and constructive feedback

Hi! I am new here. I will love a feedback. Thank you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2125209/the-warring-epoch/. This is the link

 

[Failnot]

Added everything to reading library, will get to by tomorrow

 

[Eldoria]

Added everything to reading library, will get to by tomorrow

Dude, you're awesome at reading random stories that don't even necessarily fit your preferences. I wouldn't do that—I just review fiction that I enjoy reading in my spare time.

 

[DavidBrackett]

Just a couple days in here at ScribbleHub and I'd really appreciate if you'd give my story a look. Thank you.

Escape to Star Valley

Escape to Star Valley is a long-form post-collapse novel about a small group of survivors who flee a dying city and attempt to build something human in the wilderness. What begins as survival becomes governance, then culture, then a confrontation with the world beyond their valley - and with the...

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[writerwolf359]

Sure, I’ll bite:

In the Shadow of Moonlight

Sophia “Wolfgirl” Jones has always had a strong affinity for wolves. After the death of her mother and her father’s descent into alcoholism, it becomes her refuge. Thus, when acting out a local native legend unexpectedly succeeds in turning her into a werewolf, and she meets a strange, but...

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[Humanistheart]

I’d take feedback on either of these if you would be so kind. Both take place in the same world but are quite different. The first stars a neurodivergent main character the other a MtF journey.

You Are Entering Paddlewick - The Peach of Petalik: The Courtship of Mirabelle Tansy | Scribble Hub

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Cameron To Candy

When a magical accident transforms Cameron, a free-thinking, sharp-tongued man, into a woman in the eyes of the patriarchal kingdom of Paddlewick, he doesn’t just lose his body. He loses his rights, his name, and his place in society. Now legally classified as female and forcibly renamed...

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thank you!

 

[MythicalForest]

TSR: Mountain Mover | Scribble Hub
Posting long fight chapter to finish intro and show power system today or tomorrow

 

[Fairemont]

Here's three chapters of my newest work, The Secret Lives of Magical Girls. In google docs rather than published. Not that far yet.

Youll be one of the first people to read it unless someone else beats you to it.

 

[Failnot]

I'm reading foxes' work now, after which I'll get to as much as I can

Link???
My goat doesn't need feedback because he's goated. But you can read some of the junk in my signature if you want.

Reading Princess Possession.

The synopsis is okay. I feel like you could definitely do better with it, because as it stands, even though it does tell us about the story, I think it's pretty bland. Cool art, btw.

As for the story, it's enjoyable and good at building intrigue. On top of that, you're pretty good with describing the environment and the characters, it's easy to imagine them vividly. Character dynamics are fun, and the characters themselves are interesting (Zaphenne for example manages to capture your attention without much time allotted to her. Breadcrumbs on Alyssa in her past life are very interesting). Only criticism I can think of off the top of my head is that the fight scenes I read aren't very easy to picture. For example:

"Her sword slams into Gideon’s staff, cutting him off.

Gideon turns the staff, letting the sword scrape along its length.

Tatiana pivots, bringing the sword to a full stop before reversing the swing."

This might be a skill issue on my part but I had to stand up and wield an invisible sword to figure out what was going on right here. You can afford to be more descriptive in these bits.

I don't have a lot to add here, it's pretty good stuff. When I read more, I'll leave a review.

 

[A-Random-Writer]

Could you take a look at mine?

Maybe my high school life won’t be so bad after all!

My first public novel. Sixteen-year-old Saeki Kazuya transfers to Sakuragaoka High School with one goal in mind: 'I don't want to be alone anymore.' His quiet and 'Why are you speaking to me?' personality makes him fade into a background character. His classmates barely acknowledge his...

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[MakBow]

I mean, might as well.

Level Up – To Break All Limits I Have | Scribble Hub

 

[foxes]

Well, they all ate the poor guy.

 

[Failnot]

I'm a little busy rn, but I'll be free soon and I'll tend to a few more. I'm still alive

 

[Eldoria]

I'm a little busy rn, but I'll be free soon and I'll tend to a few more. I'm still alive

Take care of your health... you can review when you have free time.