Review for review

[Ilikewaterkusa]

Link the story you want me to review and in return can you review my story. You don’t have to review mine, to get my review but it would be appreciated of you

 

[Lloyd]

Write more chapters first.

 

[Ilikewaterkusa]

Write more chapters first.

ok. How much in would you review? At the end of the first arc?

 

[Lloyd]

ok. How much in would you review? At the end of the first arc?

sure

 

[Ilikewaterkusa]

sure

That’s like 20~ chapters in. Planning each chapter to be like 2000~ words

 

[MareoKen]

I'll take you up on that offer! Here's my story: Spirit Exorcists

Since your story doesn't have that many chapters yet I'll leave some feedback in the comments instead!

 

[Ilikewaterkusa]

I'll take you up on that offer! Here's my story: Spirit Exorcists

Since your story doesn't have that many chapters yet I'll leave some feedback in the comments instead!

Ok. Saw your compliment and it was very useful! Thank you!

 

[Deleted member 68927]

OK. I will check out your story today. You have 13k words, which are enough for a review in my book. I will try to leave comments as well. Could you check out Anti-cake Dungeon Delving? It is BL with a fat to fit protagonist troupe and adventuring. If you don't like BL, I can offer either Shelter Rescue, which centers around the running of an animal shelter. Or, my fairy tale novellete: Annie and the Rice Quest.

Shelter Rescue does have romance, but it is BG. Annie and the Rice Quest has only the hint of a BG romance and focuses on an elderly protagonist. Take your pick.
You know, your story needs a lot of work. I wrote down some suggestions in the first chapter. I call off the swap, seeing as I don't intent to read further. Your story confuses me with all the dialogue that is not specified from who it was spoken.

 

[AnonUnlimited]

You know, your story needs a lot of work. I wrote down some suggestions in the first chapter. I call off the swap, seeing as I don't intent to read further. Your story confuses me with all the dialogue that is not specified from who it was spoken.

Lol.
I've been on their discord and in order to understand their writing you have to really see how they constantly interact with each other.
I really don't blame you for the confusion.

 

[Ymadthepirate]

ok im bored and your my friend so let me grab one
This is if all of earth got isekaid : https://www.scribblehub.com/series/454144/all-of-earth/

Or

you can read about Gangsters in a fictional newyork: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/483389/the-city-of-dullk-the-brimstone-blader/
Iĺl read yours aswell

 

[Deleted member 70892]

Hmm... currently I'm rewriting them... maybe later?
I'll have a look at yours if I have time.