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LilTV1155
Asking for Feedback for Archive of FAS Lores - Chapter 2
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4
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420
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
LifeContinuesOn
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I have no idea if anyone is following one of my million stories, which one should I focus one for awhile?
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3
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364
Deleted member 45782
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Beta Reader/Feedback Request
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10
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1K
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
Y
A new user and writer. Please help with my first chapter
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5
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524
Yi_San
Y
Villam
A new member needs feedback
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8
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835
Villam
Villam
F
An ero novel...
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3
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735
Friendly_neighbour
F
I
I humbly request all to read the story I have posted
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7
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1K
Representing_Tromba
Representing_Tromba
RodentCowboy
Please review and let me know what to fix for my story
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2
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341
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
Kuroinamida91
Got a 1 star rating and needing feedback.
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22
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3K
bigbear51
bigbear51
killwrites
First-time user starting a brand new series, please review it?
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15
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1K
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
HyperiousTheSun
How do you like skits?
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3
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797
SakeVision
SakeVision
RodentCowboy
Please help me become a better writer
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3
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316
RepresentingCaution
RepresentingCaution
EngineGear
Chapter 1 Feedback
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8
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662
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
L
Could somebody please give a feedback on my first work?
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6
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535
Lana
L
Archwizard
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I have written a novel about twins. Please check it out and give feedback
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4
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384
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
Archsage
What's your feedback on this?
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10
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918
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
FeverDream
How are those fight scenes?
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6
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501
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
ElijahRyne
Please tell me if something is wrong. Last chapter I messed up when writing my dialogue. My new chapter is 80% so I am just double checking.
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11
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992
ElijahRyne
ElijahRyne
Lloyd
Beta readers needed
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5
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549
Lloyd
Lloyd
CZ2
Thoughts and feedback on my light-hearted lewd comedy story first chapter?
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1
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223
SakeVision
SakeVision
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