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_oinkchan
Vile Born my novel (Soulsborne x Bloodborne typeFantasy)
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RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
Satan03
I NEED FEEDBACK!!!!
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216
Rookieqw
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Coldwarrior12
? A Yuri Harem Manga of Desire and Battle, Kuina begins
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298
Coldwarrior12
Coldwarrior12
DanielJ.Noble
Looking for Feedback on Trapped in Another Stupid World
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176
Humanistheart
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S
Feedback on Chapter 22, please!
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88
SteelyGamer1
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DanielJ.Noble
Looking for Feedback on my story Second Divine War
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164
DanielJ.Noble
DanielJ.Noble
MindFudge
Need feedback as i am rewriting
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73
MindFudge
MindFudge
AritheAlien
A noble dismantling the ruling class
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237
AritheAlien
AritheAlien
goldenphonix
New here. I need your opinion on my new book. I'm open to advice and suggestions
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Pessimystic
Posted my first story - if you like classic D&D party style fantasy with a bit of progression, please check it out!
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CharlesEBrown
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robbins117
Character Feedback - Read chapter 7
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87
robbins117
robbins117
robbins117
I will try a different approach. My story is terrible and requires much criticism and open mocking.
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225
robbins117
robbins117
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New member
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134
Angryange
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LeslieCrow
Posted my first story to SH—would love honest feedback on the blurb + tone
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196
LeslieCrow
LeslieCrow
A_the_king_of_all
My current concept draft for the 2nd chapter can anyone tell me if its good or not (feel free to roast me)
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143
A_the_king_of_all
A_the_king_of_all
Shanikumar
DARKER OBSESSION chap.7 has been released please do give your honest feedback on this novel chapter whether it's harsh or uplifting ?
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109
Shanikumar
Shanikumar
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First novel, would like some feedback on what I should improve.
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7
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336
CharlesEBrown
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AIside
Converted my novel to webnov format. Am I going in the right direction?
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3
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231
Cananga
Cananga
Madkins
Adult dark comedy feedback
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10
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319
HisDivineShadow
HisDivineShadow
PinkLemon
I need some help with my novel. I wrote the first chapter several months ago, but the more I read it, the less comfortable I felt about it.
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5
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365
PinkLemon
PinkLemon
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