Character Feedback - Read chapter 7

robbins117

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I had so much fun writing this character. Im hoping for some feedback on if the character and the chapter land alright. You can just read it by itself, Its the characters first scene. Thanks!

Oh! There are bad words. So if you dont like those, maybe skip it. lol.

Chapter is called Salt in the Wound.
 
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