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“Wrong on Purpose” — one-third of the book is ready. I’d love your feedback!
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esfirS
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friesXD
writing a story for the first time please check it out "the forgotten nation"https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1962558/the-forgotten-nation/
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friesXD
friesXD
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Do you like quests?
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CharlesEBrown
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mrweirdo
First time actually writing a story, feedback and thoughts
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mrweirdo
mrweirdo
Shanikumar
"Seeking Feedback – Darker Obsession Chapter 11 (Honest Critique Appreciated!)"
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Shanikumar
Shanikumar
AoNeko
[HIGH FANTASY / PROGRESSION] (New writer) I'm looking for feedback: Cesar: The Reincarnation of the Sun (18 Chapters)
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K_Nishi
K_Nishi
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Review swap for an Urban Fantasy
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AimeEmile
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HEllo guys ! just passing by
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akif313
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RepresentingWrath
Three's the charm free feedback thread. (Closed.)
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GardenerKing
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Leonotis
Comic version of my story
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Leonotis
Leonotis
K_Nishi
Looking for feedback on a short completed dark fantasy (4 chapters / ~2k words)
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K_Nishi
K_Nishi
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New writer looking for some feedback
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miralunem
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JUST GOT HERE
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Noveloo
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Cookiez_N_Potionz
Feedback would be appreciated since my Webnovel is almost complete
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Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
C0NSTELLATIONBEANS
Does This Story Pull You In? Feedback Appreciated!
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C0NSTELLATIONBEANS
C0NSTELLATIONBEANS
Nekyo
My Anime-Inspired Enemies to Something Story Voidlight
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Nekyo
Nekyo
LuoirM
Very Unfair Story Feedback Thread
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MrShu
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Looking for feedback on my story, is it readable ?
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Shadowless3
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LeilaniOtter
"Strange Isekai Stories" Debuts Next Month!
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LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
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Can you please tell me if the action is unclear, if the dialogue is unnatural, or if I'm over-explaining or under-describing in this passage?
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empalgepuk
empalgepuk
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