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Wrote between 700-800 words today. https://docs.google.com/document/d/14UsZbzn6X041eqax19NdOM4N2dmHWnBDyX37syGnw4k/edit?usp=drivesdk
This work is like being dropped into the typical xianxia midway. MC all powered up and able to deal with the crap powerful people flung at him.
Hell it is fun seeing all the magics flung.
But at the same time, it is exhausting, therefore I dropped at C50.
My reacts are back! Yay!
I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing 
I’d really love feedback on:
– pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?)
– characters (do they feel real?)
– emotional impact (did anything actually hit?)
Be honest, I can take it
When silence learned to speak
I’d really love feedback on:
– pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?)
– characters (do they feel real?)
– emotional impact (did anything actually hit?)
Be honest, I can take it
When silence learned to speak
14 out of 17 respondents (currently) agree that character emotions need to be narrated through showing, rather than telling by mentioning raw emotions (sad, anxiety, etc).
Authors can narrate emotions organically (by showing) through body language, psychological reactions (tears, nausea, etc), action, dialogue, and atmosphere in a scene.
The goal is to make the reader experience the emotion with the character.
Authors can narrate emotions organically (by showing) through body language, psychological reactions (tears, nausea, etc), action, dialogue, and atmosphere in a scene.
The goal is to make the reader experience the emotion with the character.
Time heals all wounds. If you're stilll hurt you haven't waited long enough.
They say time heals all wounds, but that's wrong. Time only heals some wounds. Other wounds get bigger as time goes by, and even more are created by the passage of time.
Learning about world history is a whole lot of
"This guy conquered one of the largest swathes of land in history, collapsing civilizations that lasted millennia while forming an empire that would last until his death 7 months later at age 19... while you, dear reader, are a failure who can't even fix a door hinge."
"This guy conquered one of the largest swathes of land in history, collapsing civilizations that lasted millennia while forming an empire that would last until his death 7 months later at age 19... while you, dear reader, are a failure who can't even fix a door hinge."
When is a Spoon a Sword?
The hell is this
Last night, I dreamt that I was an operative for an invasive force, and I raided a military compound. Then, I defeated a swarm of robot assassins alone and bare handed. After that, I cucked Anon and stole his wife. Lastly, I went to a store called "The Duck Pond", and I bought a live duck and named him Mister Quackers.
Skeletons are iconically hard
Skeleton bodybuilders drink milk to make their bones stronger.
There are two types of writers.