14 out of 17 respondents (currently) agree that character emotions need to be narrated through showing, rather than telling by mentioning raw emotions (sad, anxiety, etc).
Authors can narrate emotions organically (by showing) through body language, psychological reactions (tears, nausea, etc), action, dialogue, and atmosphere in a scene.
The goal is to make the reader experience the emotion with the character.
Authors can narrate emotions organically (by showing) through body language, psychological reactions (tears, nausea, etc), action, dialogue, and atmosphere in a scene.
The goal is to make the reader experience the emotion with the character.
that had a very poignant ending (for its current arc) that kinda marked me.
The girl is crying.
Because she lost a mentor. Someone she liked as much like her mom. (bc orphan and sole of her kin)
People try to recomfort her.
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