Writing Hot Takes

[gaylolis]

It sounds like you just want a BL.

technically i did write something about two schoolboys who got turned into futanari schoolgirls and went really gay for each other. it's a lot more satisfying than expected.

as for actual BL, technically I do read a lot of them on panda but that involves feminization + body modification, which gave me complaints about what I said earlier, 'cuz a lot of authors on that site just really likes that thing. since the art were also hot af, i end up letting it slide anyway.

but yea it's only if they end up transforming like girls, with bigger tits and that it starts to get interesting, but if they look too much like guys i wasn't that into it, honestly.

it's mostly due to lack of alternative for my specific niche, so i'll just roll with the next best thing.

 

[CarburetorThompson]

Isekai is boring, often times the isekai bit only matters for the first few chapters than it just becomes generic fantasy.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Almost every advice, guide, and tip about writing is garbage. I mean the ones that are NOT about technical aspects like grammar, what app is better for writing, what dictionary is better, etc.

 

[Vladarius]

gender bender is objectively bad, just like harem.

 

[RepresentingSilence]

gender bender is objectively bad, just like harem.

The best "gender benders" I've read had a girl dressing up as a guy for whatever reasons and shenanigans ensuing all others have been hardcore trash

 

[OtherSlater]

Isekai is boring, often times the isekai bit only matters for the first few chapters than it just becomes generic fantasy.

Damn you not too far off...

Almost every advice, guide, and tip about writing is garbage. I mean the ones that are NOT about technical aspects like grammar, what app is better for writing, what dictionary is better, etc.

Nah. You are inherently biased toward your own writing, so you need outside eyes.

gender bender is objectively bad, just like harem.

Objectively false. Not exactly factual, and the reasons you'll give me for not liking it are going to be subjective.

People seem to mistake writing simplistically as don't write large paragraphs. I cannot tell you the amount of times on RR when people said my paragraphs were too long and I need to write more simplistic, when most of the sentences I wrote barely went into any description. Taking that advice ends up with authors writing two sentence paragraphs that has the writing style of The Road. The simple, almost childlike writing style worked for that book, but it shouldn't be the standard.

Sure. I mean it's your book, do it how you want.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Nah. You are inherently biased toward your own writing, so you need outside eyes.

I was not talking about critique.

 

[Vladarius]

Damn you not too far off...

Nah. You are inherently biased toward your own writing, so you need outside eyes.

Objectively false. Not exactly factual, and the reasons you'll give me for not liking it are going to be subjective.

Sure. I mean it's your book, do it how you want.

im not gonna give a reason, and since there is no reason to be given then its objectively true.

 

[OtherSlater]

im not gonna give a reason, and since there is no reason to be given then its objectively true

Literally you rn

 

[Vladarius]

Literally you rn

Basically :)
didn't know I had such nice boxers.