Writer Domain Expansion

TheMonotonePuppet

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To be a writer, the hidden truth is... you have to be arrogant.
You have to believe your world will be something others will want to live in, and then believe you can create a snapshot of life that can stand out amongst everyone else. As a writer, one giggles, and then callously steps on the shoulders of the writers on around you like stepping onto a house of cards painstakingly assembled by someone else. Your greed to make scenes or fame or whatever must be exceptional.

As a jujutsu sorcerer, you too have to be arrogant. You have to be greedy to succeed.

What is your domain expansion?

For me, I would use the Mayurakhyo hand sign, for the peacock. It would be called Monochrome Toy's Grubby Mittens. Psychedelic eyes of great appearance would appear in pitch black, weeping dull grey fluid until it surrounded both me and the enemy. The eyes would analyze the soul of the enemy, judging the level of color within the soul. If they are entertaining enough, colorful enough, then they are mine to do with as I wish. I will then proceed to play and make friends with them. They will not die though, and if they make it out of the maze that my domain will turn into, they will get a permanent boon. If not, I would be able to consume them, threads pouring from my mouth and around their body, dragging them into me and sealing them permanently. This has more of a risk of permanent damage to myself. A large piece of flesh or skin of me will turn to turn to thread of the color that matches them best (does not mess with my technique), the thread gaining an ability based off of the jujutsu sorcerer's most important quality.

 
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Make a giant operating theatre/ER ward that's used to heal allies and people inside. Or 'operate' on enemies. Just a cold, sterile place, aside from the super bugs that'll probably be lurking in the background and looking for any wounds to nestle in. If anyone needs some healing, then you've come to the right place. Guaranteed to come back in tip top shape, though don't expect it to be painless. Anaesthesia is not cheap.

No discounts either. If your card gets rejected, then I'm undoing the entire process.
 

TheMonotonePuppet

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then I not a writer
I didn't mean actually make a life there or something! You are taking it differently! Grrr...
I meant that the reader will want to imagine, to be surrounded the details of the world. Even if it's to experience disgust, the feeling of not wanting to live there, etc.
The other stuff still applies anyway even if the above is still not enough to bring you around to it. That's still enough for being a writer.
@Syringe That's a pretty awesome domain! Pretty terrifying to fight against, and it's nice to see a healing focus/beneficial one. You don't really see any of those in JJK (thinking of anime. Don't know if there is one in manga and please don't tell me anything from the manga that isn't in the anime) I wonder what hand sign yours would be...
I am intrigued. What are some of the reasons behind the design elements? The focus on sterile and cold, as well healing and harming alike. I know it draws from your story, but are there any other reasons?
 

Syringe

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That's a pretty awesome domain! Pretty terrifying to fight against, and it's nice to see a healing focus/beneficial one. You don't really see any of those in JJK (thinking of anime. Don't know if there is one in manga and please don't tell me anything from the manga that isn't in the anime) I wonder what hand sign yours would be...
I am intrigued. What are some of the reasons behind the design elements? The focus on sterile and cold, as well healing and harming alike. I know it draws from your story, but are there any other reasons?
I'm a healer IRL, so that's where it comes from. Sterile for cleanliness (and super ironic for super bugs to propagate there too), cold to control/reduce the spread of infection and make it hard for bugs to thrive (hence why hospitals are very, VERY cold. Warm environments make them grow like crazy).

Healing for obvious reasons, but harming because an IRL healer would know exactly how to undo it/aggravate an injury (e.g, dropping a solid into an IV line. That's an obstruction/artificial embolism, straight to a heart attack/pulmonary obstruction). Sadly, there is a very real incident that happened in my area regarding this.

Or you know, sticking drains into people for fun. There's that too.
 
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I'm a healer IRL, so that's where it comes from. Sterile for cleanliness (and super ironic for super bugs to propagate there too), cold to control/reduce the spread of infection and make it hard for bugs to thrive (hence why hospitals are very, VERY cold. Warm environments make them grow like crazy).

Healing for obvious reasons, but harming because an IRL healer would know exactly how to undo it/aggravate an injury (e.g, dropping a solid into an IV line. That's a obstruction/artificial embolism, straight to a heart attack/pulmonary obstruction). Sadly, there is a very real incident that happened in my area regarding this.
:love: :s_frown:(y)(y)(y):love::s_smile:
 

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misterious box gacha hell, it will start with me i can chose either choose open the box or send it to my enemy. if i send the box to my enemy he will receive part of my curse energy as a boon after that he 5 s to choose give me back the box or open it. if he give me back the box he will have to give me double the curse energy i gave him and that go on. if anyone open the box something random will happen good or bad no one knows.if u cant pay the price to give away the box u open the box. u spend all your curse energy to open the box. the more curse energy spent the stronger the effect.
 

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Mine would be a dollar store Limitless Void, except instead of feeding you infinite information, it will feed you the exact information that you need to procrastinate at that very moment. And then as soon as you're about to get up and think of doing something productive, you find yet another perfect excuse to procrastinate!

Worse yet, drinks, snacks, interesting youtube videos, a fluffy couch and a really cute fox come completely free!

It's the domain of Eternal Hiatus.

Fear me, for across all of living room and kitchen, I alone am the couch potato!

(Actual reoccurring thing I plan to have in my novels called 'Elysium', but of course, the effects of this domain are applied on me constantly, so I never get anything done)
 

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misterious box gacha hell, it will start with me i can chose either choose open the box or send it to my enemy. if i send the box to my enemy he will receive part of my curse energy as a boon after that he 5 s to choose give me back the box or open it. if he give me back the box he will have to give me double the curse energy i gave him and that go on. if anyone open the box something random will happen good or bad no one knows.if u cant pay the price to give away the box u open the box. u spend all your curse energy to open the box. the more curse energy spent the stronger the effect.
What's the origin for this? Are you a gambling addict or adrenaline junkie? This puppet is veeery surprised that as to how this is related to anything in your life. Cool though!
I wonder what hand sign yours would be... I'm thinking (uma)/horse sign. My logic train? Gacha gambling -->Alcohol-->Drunk ass-->ass is mule-->horse akin to mule
Mine would be a dollar store Limitless Void, except instead of feeding you infinite information, it will feed you the exact information that you need to procrastinate at that very moment. And then as soon as you're about to get up and think of doing something productive, you find yet another perfect excuse to procrastinate!

It's the domain of Eternal Hiatus.

Fear me, for across all of living room and kitchen, I alone am the couch potato!

(Actual reoccurring thing I plan to have in my novels called 'Elysium', but of course, the effects of this domain are applied on me constantly, so I never get anything done)
@SsemouyOnan AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! KEEP THAT AWAAAAAAAAAAY!!! *shrill, shrieking tone*
Dastardly, truly dastardly.
I don't wanna be a couch potat-t-t-t-t-ohohohooooo... *sobbing/stuttering from sobbing noises*
 

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What is your domain expansion?
For me, it's Omniversal Domain Expansion

Pretty much look like Gojo's, but this domain is a white void and it's much worse than his information overloading domain, the domain overloads you with a lot of stories from countless of Animes, Mangas, and Novels, even Hen with all kinds of it is included.

Oh I remembered that I wrote that as my MC's domain expansion reference, it's broken and can make the target suffer because of witnessing cursed things that they hated the most.
 

TheMonotonePuppet

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For me, it's Omniversal Domain Expansion

Pretty much look like Gojo's, but this domain is a white void and it's much worse than his information overloading domain, the domain overloads you with a lot of stories from countless of Animes, Mangas, and Novels, even Hen with all kinds of it is included.

Oh I remembered that I wrote that as my MC's domain expansion reference, it's broken and can make the target suffer because of witnessing cursed things that they hated the most.
We have a lot of Gojo inspirations here. I'm going to change mine up a bit so there are less Gojo inspirations Lol.

Imagine the people who are immune to your expansion.
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They scare me.
 
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I make a theatre with me at the center stage. Anyone caught in the domain is strapped into a seat while being forced to listen to the worst jokes I have ever told on the forums. Even though they aren't funny, you will start laughing. You will continue laughing until you piss yourself, and you will slowly go insane. Even if you broke out of my domain, remembering the shitty jokes will make you laugh; however, that is only if you manage to escape.

If you don't manage to escape you will be stuck there laughing until your funny bone hurts, but it doesn't stop there. You will go mad with laughter until you die a slow painful death filled with the joy of my terrible humor.
 

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Then, those are emotionless people. Pretty scary but everyone had a trauma of something
You wish, but not everyone hates something enough that it will matter if they get shown it. It's fine having chinks in the domain. It strengthens the other aspects. Your domain can't be flawless. There is give and take in the JJK universe, even for people like Gojo.
 

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My Domain Expansion, Hyper Sense World.

Have you ever watch that infamous Pokemon episode, the Porygon one. Yeah, it's that cranked up to fifty.
Pulling people into a rave party, where their senses are stimulated to their absolute limit. Bright light flashing to the point of going blind, music so loud it shatter eardrums, aroma so bad and good it messed up the nose, the air taste so disgusting and delicious it destroy the tastebuds, anything they touch they feel a hundred times more, even pain.
And worst of all, memetics are everywhere, using the five senses as bridges to overload one's mind with information. The memetics last for a lifetime, since "Memes are the DNA of the soul".
 

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I make a theatre with me at the center stage. Anyone caught in the domain is strapped into a seat while being forced to listen to the worst jokes I have ever told on the forums. Even though they aren't funny, you will start laughing. You will continue laughing until you piss yourself, and you will slowly go insane. Even if you broke out of my domain, remembering the shitty jokes will make you laugh; however, that is only if you manage to escape.

If you don't manage to escape you will be stuck there laughing until your funny bone hurts, but it doesn't stop there. You will go mad with laughter until you die a slow painful death filled with the joy of my terrible humor.
I like the originality of this one. That it is genuine horror with the mind control aspects of it combined with meme-ness, not just the ladder, is what makes this so great. And the extra mile you went with describing certain physical reactions makes it extra awesome!
Reading into the domain... interesting. Iiinteresting.
My Domain Expansion, Hyper Sense World.

Have you ever watch that infamous Pokemon episode, the Porygon one. Yeah, it's that cranked up to fifty.
Pulling people into a rave party, where their senses are stimulated to their absolute limit. Bright light flashing to the point of going blind, music so loud it shatter eardrums, aroma so bad and good it messed up the nose, the air taste so disgusting and delicious it destroy the tastebuds, anything they touch they feel a hundred times more, even pain.
And worst of all, memetics are everywhere, using the five senses as bridges to overload one's mind with information. The memetics last for a lifetime, since "Memes are the DNA of the soul".
@Rhaps I hate this one so, so much. So, so, so, so much. The end result of being exposed to this domain is scratching the skin and flesh off of my face. And you and @RepresentingEnvy !!! WHY THE LONG-LASTING MENTAL DAMAGE!?!?
... I've got enough as is...
LOL!
This is actually great. The fact that it elicits a visceral reaction from me is even better!!!
 

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Lol, by the end of this we should drag someone through all the domains that cause mental scars, and then drag them into Syringe's domain to see how far up the medical bill goes XD
I love this idea so much.
I vote @Tsuru .
Why them?
Well...
I haven't really included them in anything of my own volition, so...
I don't want them to feel left out...
:devilish:?????
 
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