Hi everybody!
Nice to join the community :D
I'm sharing a novel on RoyalRoad. Been 7 months or so. No ads. Just shoutouts. I have a small community around it, but I started wondering if it's really the right platform all along. RoyalRoad is heavily built on LitRPG and Power fantasies, and I honestly have no idea about ScribbleHub. I read here in the forums that it can be be better for character-driven stories and niches and that's exactly the kind of story I'm writing.
On RoyalRoad, I recently got a review from a dude who left a 3.5/5 ( not bad ) but he dropped the novel because the main character is too innocent for his taste. I wrote the protagonist not for a self-insert narrative ( which is what LitRPGs and Power fantasies do ), but I tried to write him realistically— a kid in an overwhelming world trying not to break. Thanks to this review, I believe maybe I'm reaching out to the wrong audience?
I'm not after trends or anything. This is something I wrote with passion, care and love. A hobby. My first and final story. The win for me is a niche connecting with the characters, looking forward to the next chapter, joining a discord server I created.
Here is the synopsis.
Among streets ruled by hunger and fear, hope comes from the most unexpected hands: a child’s.
Thirteen-year-old
Alex is torn from his quiet village by his uncle—
Dominick, a feared mob enforcer known as
the Undertaker. To protect his parents, Alex is thrown into Portenzo City: a ruthless place where corruption, violence, and power rule.
As he stumbles through the underworld, the boy meets other kids like him:
Dante, his partner in crime;
Noor, a violinist with secrets; and
the Wolves, a street gang who fight for each other because no one else will.
How long before survival demands he lets his innocence go?
This is a slow-burn, psychological coming-of-age story about identity, loyalty, and survival—where fists, wit, and found family mean the difference between life and death.
What to Expect:

Story is finished—Just needs polishing on the initial drafts
? Young kids as the heart of the story
? Themes of tragedy, poverty, child labor, and life in crime-ridden, corrupt cities
? Found family, deep bonds, bromance, brotherhood, and sweet children romance

Slow-burn, character-driven storytelling with mystery and plot twists and flashbacks to explore each character's past
? Martial arts, gritty fights, and street gang clashes
? Politics and strategic games
What NOT to Expect:

A power‑fantasy

Smutt

Over-the-top nonstop action

Purely Mafia-focused plot

Magic or supernatural elements

An edgy or morally detached protagonist
Inspirations: World Masterpiece Theater Animes
Chapters word count: 2k-4k