Would my novel work now?

Arch9CivilReactor

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I remember writing 100+ of a novel a good portion of readers mostly disliked because it was being ‘too meta’. This was the opinion I got early on but still continued to write out of passion.

It was a post-modernist story planned out.
—“Postmodern literature is a form of literature which is marked, both stylistically and ideologically, by a reliance on such literary conventions as fragmentation, paradox, unreliable narrators, often unrealistic and downright impossible plots, games, parody, paranoia, dark humor and authorial self-reference.”

It was basically pure chaos with time travellers, reincarnates, a narrator who gained sentience that rebelled against its author, and ‘reformed’ anarchist cult members that were very expressive. Each main character well-defined.

Around the 100th chapter mark a plot twist happens that gave the narrator ‘character development’. He gets betrayed by a meta defying being like himself due to being naive and suffers the consequences of his innocence.

Did I mention I’d used Text Emoji a lot?

I feel like there are more readers who might appreciate the work now. Though even if not then I might as well finish the first arc, right? I was so close to finishing it too if it weren’t for IRL reasons and my low self-esteem at the time.

Will have a look over it beforehand though to see if there a tweaks that can be made. I have done my best to improve the story over these years while crafting a non-linear narrative that can be read in different ways.

Might as well just post it and think about all this stuff later. No reason to overthink things.
 

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Can you post a link?
I think if complexity is a problem you could use character subjectivity (delusion) to create a easy answer that might be wrong.
 

John_Owl

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I feel like a meta novel is just really hard to pull off in general. But im dying to see how your using emojis
anything that references the real world outside the novel would be easy to do, but insanely difficult to do WELL. Deadpool is a prime example of it done well, but novels are completely different. You can't just have the character physically turn to look at the camera/viewer, as there is no viewport you're looking at them from. that said, I'm definitely curious to see how OP handled it.
 

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Did I mention I’d used Text Emoji a lot?
OK, I know a lot of writers who consider this a VERY bad idea (have seen people complaining about it on SubStack for a few days now) - two of the biggest gripes professional writers have against "millennial authors" are a tendency to shovel in "ironic humor" everywhere, and a tendency to use emojis as part of the text.
I feel like there are more readers who might appreciate the work now. Though even if not then I might as well finish the first arc, right? I was so close to finishing it too if it weren’t for IRL reasons and my low self-esteem at the time.
I would suggest sharing it somewhere just to see - and, as it is clearly an experimental novel, don't worry too much at how well it is received - James Joyce only had a few positive critiques of Finnegan's Wake and a lot of people just complained about the "obvious pornography" (which is kind of a "blink and you miss it" moment to modern readers but was scandalous when it was published) in one chapter of Ulysses rather than actually viewing the novel as a whole. Experimental stuff usually EVENTUALLY finds its audience, but never gets a lot of recognition unless it triggers a lot of copycats (and if it does, odds are one of the copycats, unless they acknowledge the original frequently, will eclipse it).
Will have a look over it beforehand though to see if there a tweaks that can be made. I have done my best to improve the story over these years while crafting a non-linear narrative that can be read in different ways.
There are always tweaks. Always. No manuscript is 100% perfect, ever.
Ah, non-linear; the only non-linear long fiction I've ever really enjoyed was Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt Vonnegut.
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Honestly I'd lie if I said I wasn't interested but at the same time I feel like you tried to blend a bit too much together. 'If everything is a plot twist then there is no plot twist' kind of thing.
 

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OK, I know a lot of writers who consider this a VERY bad idea (have seen people complaining about it on SubStack for a few days now) - two of the biggest gripes professional writers have against "millennial authors" are a tendency to shovel in "ironic humor" everywhere, and a tendency to use emojis as part of the text.
? They ? Are ? All ? Cowards! ??
 

Arch9CivilReactor

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I feel like a meta novel is just really hard to pull off in general. But im dying to see how your using emojis
I’ll post it today and update my status when I’m done. Need to have a good look at the prologue and edit it a bit (check grammar and stuff).
Can you post a link?
I think if complexity is a problem you could use character subjectivity (delusion) to create a easy answer that might be wrong.
Sorry I meant to reply to this one.
 

AmeronWerschrux

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Your story is a bit similar to myself in meta. Except I think the chaos will be sprrad throughtout a long span. Pretty interesting, I'd say!
 

Dieter

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I wouldn't read it. I enjoy postmodern books for their novel devices, not for their story.
Trying to immerse your readers into a world and being meta at the same time do not mix.
 
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