Zagaroth
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Most of my protagonists represent aspects of a moral compass, but one of the clearest/strongest examples would be Kazue.
She's an adorable and sweet kitsune who wants to cuddle with her cute animal friends and curl up with a book and a cup of hot tea (or cocoa, once introduced to chocolate), and at night is happily snuggled (and other things) with her husband and her wife (she's usually the one in the center).
If you can well and truly enrage her to the point that she snaps with violence, you have been living a wrong life. She is peaceful, not harmless, especially once her spouses start training her in how to really find and use her strengths, and do a little bit of work to shore up her weaknesses.
Even worse than her snapping with rage: Kazue willing embarks on a training expedition with her family that involves weeks of trekking through ever increasing danger and discomfort in order to strengthen herself enough to then go on a shorter but just as miserable (and in some ways worse) expedition with the goal of taking down the antagonist.
It is technically not her true goal, nor the most important goal for anyone else on that trip, but it is part of the complete picture of how the most important goals are going to be accomplished.
You know this guy F'd up. All I am going to say is at the chapter when the antagonist is revealed to the reader (though not yet to the protagonists), most of the comments on that chapter were along the lines of "I am looking forward to this guy's death."
She's an adorable and sweet kitsune who wants to cuddle with her cute animal friends and curl up with a book and a cup of hot tea (or cocoa, once introduced to chocolate), and at night is happily snuggled (and other things) with her husband and her wife (she's usually the one in the center).
If you can well and truly enrage her to the point that she snaps with violence, you have been living a wrong life. She is peaceful, not harmless, especially once her spouses start training her in how to really find and use her strengths, and do a little bit of work to shore up her weaknesses.
Even worse than her snapping with rage: Kazue willing embarks on a training expedition with her family that involves weeks of trekking through ever increasing danger and discomfort in order to strengthen herself enough to then go on a shorter but just as miserable (and in some ways worse) expedition with the goal of taking down the antagonist.
It is technically not her true goal, nor the most important goal for anyone else on that trip, but it is part of the complete picture of how the most important goals are going to be accomplished.
You know this guy F'd up. All I am going to say is at the chapter when the antagonist is revealed to the reader (though not yet to the protagonists), most of the comments on that chapter were along the lines of "I am looking forward to this guy's death."