ElijahRyne
A Hermit that’s NOT that Lazy, currentlycomplainen
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Which chapter, that you wrote, is your favorite? Why? Is there anything you would change in it?
Mine is this:
www.scribblehub.com
It foreshadows quite abit, and while writing it I had quite abit of fun. It is also a nice bit of calm before the storm, whenever I think back to this project this is the first chapter I think of. I can’t even write in the style of that project anymore, where it feels like every line is building to a crescendo or pianissimo. Unfortunately this chapter is clunky in my opinion, for example I use ‘then’ way too much imo and some of the lines are way to wordy. So if I were to restart the project I would probably have to edit it abit better.
What about you? What is your favorite of the chapters you have written, and why? Is there anything you would change?
Mine is this:
Gullnain - Garry Vrenturch (3) Pancakes | Scribble Hub
It foreshadows quite abit, and while writing it I had quite abit of fun. It is also a nice bit of calm before the storm, whenever I think back to this project this is the first chapter I think of. I can’t even write in the style of that project anymore, where it feels like every line is building to a crescendo or pianissimo. Unfortunately this chapter is clunky in my opinion, for example I use ‘then’ way too much imo and some of the lines are way to wordy. So if I were to restart the project I would probably have to edit it abit better.
What about you? What is your favorite of the chapters you have written, and why? Is there anything you would change?