What is the sickest or most horrifying thing you have written?

[aWildDucky]

For my Angel System Story?

Using a child to paint the hallway a fresher shade of red. TBH I didn't go into that much detail, All I said was that they were lying in a pool of their own blood. BUTTTTT That's where readers draw the line apparently lmao.

Not the zombie kids, the child soldiers, the double amputee cyborg princess who's parents sawed off her arms, or, the fact that theres a cybernetic cat girl who can remove her head. And given the context clues about magic users and their ability to regenerate. It means that someone had to remove her head as a child and keep it alive with cybernetics before reattaching it to a body that found her compatible enough to activate the Magic System.

Can't wait till my readers meet the Green Bishop and the Orchestra of the Decraniated (Hundreds of zombified-like children/failed experiments that augment the Bishop's abilities by chanting magic incantations) And the MC having to put down these ravenous ghouls and puppets as the Bishop preaches about the glory of science and his "Children's" sacrifice for the greater good.

And the best part is, the Green Bishop ain't even the BBEG mwhahahahaha. He's just a minion to the head of the High Table lol.

Some other ideas I have is the Purple Pawn's Playroom(Torture/sex dungeon where she breaks people and experiments with cybernetics/finds subjects for Green Bishop)

The Garden of Gold(Hundreds of people/animals turned to Gold by the Gold Queen who sells the statues as "Works of Art")

I also have other ideas regarding GEN4 Mech Pilots and their updated neuro-link, giving them the ability to listen to other pilot's thoughts, which adds more horror to the battlefield :>

I'm stuffing all the dark stuff into one story so I can write Nekomancer as a fun story lmao.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

For my Angel System Story?

Using a child to paint the hallway a fresher shade of red. TBH I didn't go into that much detail, All I said was that they were lying in a pool of their own blood. BUTTTTT That's where readers draw the line apparently lmao.

Not the zombie kids, the child soldiers, the double amputee cyborg princess who's parents sawed off her arms, or, the fact that theres a cybernetic cat girl who can remove her head. And given the context clues about magic users and their ability to regenerate. It means that someone had to remove her head as a child and keep it alive with cybernetics before reattaching it to a body that found her compatible enough to activate the Magic System.

Can't wait till my readers meet the Green Bishop and the Orchestra of the Decraniated (Hundreds of zombified-like children/failed experiments that augment the Bishop's abilities by chanting magic incantations) And the MC having to put down these ravenous ghouls and puppets as the Bishop preaches about the glory of science and his "Children's" sacrifice for the greater good.

And the best part is, the Green Bishop ain't even the BBEG mwhahahahaha. He's just a minion to the head of the High Table lol.

Some other ideas I have is the Purple Pawn's Playroom(Torture/sex dungeon where she breaks people and experiments with cybernetics/finds subjects for Green Bishop)

The Garden of Gold(Hundreds of people/animals turned to Gold by the Gold Queen who sells the statues as "Works of Art")

I also have other ideas regarding GEN4 Mech Pilots and their updated neuro-link, giving them the ability to listen to other pilot's thoughts, which adds more horror to the battlefield :>

I'm stuffing all the dark stuff into one story so I can write Nekomancer as a fun story lmao.

That's hilarious!!! Pretty humorous that is where they draw the line. Sounds like a great story! The dark stuff sounds delightfully deranged and lovingly innovated.

 

[Mortrexo]

It should be one of my characters force-fed the person who R*ped her a pill with three parasites, one that lives in the nerves, another in the muscle, and the last in the organs. They feed and heal the host as they fight against each other for dominance inside, creating a balanced but infinite ecosystem of bugs eating everything and healing everything inside that person. Naturally, these parasites create substances to prevent the body from failing or lowering the activity, therefore making the person unable to live or die while constantly suffering.

 

[aWildDucky]

Oh hey, I just realized you're the guy that always comments on my chapters lmao

That's hilarious!!! Pretty humorous that is where they draw the line. Sounds like a great story! The dark stuff sounds delightfully deranged and lovingly innovated.

Got picked up by a publisher that's doing an audiobook of it :3 So not too bad. I might do a different version/Route where I can really get into the dark stuff. 300K words and this thing is mostly Academy stuff and world stuff happening around the MC. At the rate the story is going, I'll probably hit like 700ish Chapters or something lol

 

[Desustar]

I've read 120 days of Sodom... and pretty much 230053 and tons of other copies

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

Oh hey, I just realized you're the guy that always comments on my chapters lmao

Got picked up by a publisher that's doing an audiobook of it :3 So not too bad. I might do a different version/Route where I can really get into the dark stuff. 300K words and this thing is mostly Academy stuff and world stuff happening around the MC. At the rate the story is going, I'll probably hit like 700ish Chapters or something lol

Lmao! That is indeed me! Guilty as charged! LOL!
And bravo! That's awesome to hear! Congratulations!!!

 

[Domoviye]

Long time ago, in a dark period I wrote a novella that was torture porn.
The MC couldn't die because it was VR with every sensation jacked up to max level. There was rape, torture, repeated deaths, and the MC managed to turn the tables making one of their attackers commit suicide, and another go insane from torture that seemed to last years.
It was seriously messed up, and while I've gone to dark places in my work since then, none have gone quiet that far.

 

[TheEldritchGod]

Nothing I write is dark, sick or horrifying. Everything I write is perfectly normal. For example, I just wrote the part where a vampire tried to feed on the MC and... well...

Spoiler: Spoilers for Hotrod Lantern

"Fuck." Jake turned to try and push the woman off, but she pulled back on her own, her entire mouth in flames as she screached in agony. The second woman backed away letting out a scream while baring fangs, the flames from the first dancing in her eyes.

Jake's attacker stumbled away to a nearby table and grabbed a pitcher of beer from a table and splashed it into her face. It did nothing to stop the burning. Jake sighed and slowly shook his head, "I was about to warn you. You shouldn't have jumped-" The woman's jaw fell off, along with most of the flames. She looked quite ghastly with her burned, forked tongue flickering in the open blackened remains of her face, "-The Gun."

The area around the two of them started to clear out. The second woman had already vanished into the crowd. Jake just watched as the wanna be siren finally collapsed against the wall and looked like she had gone ten rounds with a wrecking ball, but still alive, if you could call her that.

"Every bodily fluid in my body has been replaced with Corrosive, hate-filled burning plasma." Jake said with a smile. Then he blinked.

He blinked HARD.

"Hold it."

His eyes went wide as his head fell forward to look directly at his own crotch.

"No."

Bouncers were closing in on his position, but Jake ignored them as he looked at his red ring, "RED. Do NOT tell me that EVERY fluid in my body has been replaced!"

Red spoke with no amount of humor in its voice, "Sure thing, MASTER! I will NOT tell you that every fluid in your body has been replaced." Yellow started to snicker.

Jake stabbed a finger at his red ring, "DO NOT FUCK WITH ME!"

Red cheerfully replied, "Of Course, MASTER! And ironically, you shouldn't fuck anyone either, unless of course you were hoping to cause their pelvis to dissolve."

His yellow ring began to laugh hysterically.

See? What's horrifying about THAT? Who could consider that terrible by any stretch of the imagination. That's like... Tuesday.

 

[CarburetorThompson]

I used very vague language, but in my short story posted here a main plot point is a sexual assault that turns into a race riot leaving a bunch of people dead.

 

[AnonUnlimited]

I wrote an NTR.

 

[Speedwagon889]

I once wrote a fanfic one-shot in which one of the less popular ship options for the MC kidnapped the love interest that is most popular in the fanbase, and began torturing her physically, emotionally, and sexually with as much detail as I could stomach. It ended with the girl being tortured dying, only to be resurrected to be tortured anew. Its working title was 'The Experiment' because of how brutally different it was from what I usually like to write. It was fun, probably won't be a long while before I do something like it again, but I enjoyed it for what it was

 

[zephyrzane]

I think it would be one of the things I wrote in a novel. A princess and her loyal guard get thrown in prison. He has to watch as some absolutely terrible things are done to her. Ultimately, she can't take it and he can't do anything as she kills herself.

 

[TheEldritchGod]

Well... now that I'm thinking about it... I had a Rejected SCP once.

So the guy builds an interdimensional portal in his basement when he brings his work home from the foundation and accidentally finds the "Innocent Casino"

It's a casino where the currency is "innocence".

Long story short, he figures out a loophole in the game, starts to win big, then they catch him cheating.

So he winds up a "Rape Cube" where all his orifices are stretched out to a side (except for the sex organs. They wind up on the same side, one of each.) And then they sent him home. His wife got to find a gibbering abused cube oozing all sorts of fluids from every side in the basement next to a de-powered portal and a note saying:

To Whom It May Concern,

The casino decided not to press charges and instead simply chose to accept compensation equal to the amount stolen, however, as of this time, we feel that humanity is no longer worthy of being a client.

You guys need to grow up.

- The Innocent Casino Mgt Team.


You Tell Me How THAT was too much for the SCP website!

 

[Shard]

So far, I think the worst is what happened to an animal that the MC needed gone. Head lit on fire, eyes exploding from the heat, then fire held on the head until it finally died. When your main weapon is controllable fire, and you know the head is a weakpoint in addition to containing the senses required to find you...

 

[Seaspecter]

I had a scene where my MC gets kidnapped she snaps and turns into a tentacle monster and proceeds to eat everyone in a fortress. I describe it all in graphic detail. I didn't end up using it in the novel though.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

I had a scene where my MC gets kidnapped she snaps and turns into a tentacle monster and proceeds to eat everyone in a fortress. I describe it all in graphic detail. I didn't end up using it in the novel though.

Ooohhhh! That's a nice one!

 

[Seaspecter]

Ooohhhh! That's a nice one!

She's a baby elder god so these things happen. I only didn't use the scene because it's part of a scrapped story arch and I couldn't figure out out to make it work with the arch I decided on going with.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

She's a baby elder god so these things happen. I only didn't use the scene because it's part of a scrapped story arch and I couldn't figure out out to make it work with the arch I decided on going with.

I understand that. I had a scene where Betsie killed Sol and ended the story as a mercy kill. Obviously, that did not happen as you might have seen in the author's note. I couldn't bear to let go of the story.

 

[Seaspecter]

I understand that. I had a scene where Betsie killed Sol and ended the story as a mercy kill. Obviously, that did not happen as you might have seen in the author's note. I couldn't bear to let go of the story.

I really would have understood why you did that honestly.

 

[Rezcore]

Fiction or nonfiction? Because I've written some gruesome nonfiction reports over the years