EldritchPotato
Eldritch deity & really hard thinker.
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- Mar 12, 2023
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Ugh, I get that. I’ve gotten several comments which just makes me question if they actually read the story. I’m more than happy for criticism but like… what is the point of complaining about something that isn’t even in the story?Spoonfeeding.
I read some comments and reviews and I feel like those readers only skimmed through the story. They say that things happen randomly but don't stop to think about the dialogue and context clues I gave them in previous chapters. I really want my readers to come to conclusion on their own instead of writing it all out.
To quote an example from a reviewer who knows how to pierce together clues themselves:
"People seems to throw the term "torture pr0n" around without any care. Any misfortune I see the progronist encounter is justified since there's a clear reason behind it. I think people either skim through the story or don't give enough attention to details.
I think the consensus is that it something bad happens to the protagonist and there's no immediate gratification, it's torture pr0n. Even if the misfortune is reasonable and caused by the protagonist herself not thinking carefully before actin, it's torture pr0n
I think that her way of pinsihing the protagonist for her action is much better than oh no the protagonist fought fiercely and now she's injured but don't worry because she'll be healed by the start of next arc
Many people also complain about the character Dark which I also don't understand. We have an Arc that introduce the existence of demon lords relics. We have another arc that also has a relic of demon lords. Surprise surprise, a demon appears, and people still complains that it's out of nowhere."