Very Unfair Story Feedback Thread

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Hello, my name's LuoirM (ignore the username currently I couldn't change it yet, my teenage years were wild). And here's my
Very Unfair Story Feedback Thread

Why is it" Very Unfair"
Because I have a reading disability (undiagnosed).
I only remember reading exactly one book in my life, back in 7th grade. It was a Chinese romance.
I tried reading online novels before, but never got past the first 5 lines. Both in my native tongue and in Engrisk.

How does this work?
Give me a link. I'll tell you when did I stop reading, and as an unimportant reader, would I ever come back?
Gon give advices, too, if you're female.


Why should you use my service?
Because if you're really, really good at captivating the eyes, and managed to capture someone with a problem like myself, it's a very great feat!
It's free!

Why shouldn't you use my service?
Because I can, and possibly will, stop reading right at the synopsis, comment "I can't read past the synopsis" and that will demoralize you as an author, you may think that you're a bad author even if you're not.

Dilemma huh? Alright, let's go, if you dare...
 

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I would like to give you something that would make you question your sense of reality and traumatize you but instead take a power fantasy: 100
 

LuoirM

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I would like to give you something that would make you question your sense of reality and traumatize you but instead take a power fantasy: 100
I stopped reading when it was loading, because I glanced on top and saw "fables until my" isn't capitalized like an average novel title and it's an ick for me.


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Hello, my name's LuoirM (ignore the username currently I couldn't change it yet, my teenage years were wild). And here's my
Very Unfair Story Feedback Thread

Why is it" Very Unfair"
Because I have a reading disability (undiagnosed).
I only remember reading exactly one book in my life, back in 7th grade. It was a Chinese romance.
I tried reading online novels before, but never got past the first 5 lines. Both in my native tongue and in Engrisk.

How does this work?
Give me a link. I'll tell you when did I stop reading, and as an unimportant reader, would I ever come back?
Gon give advices, too, if you're female.


Why should you use my service?
Because if you're really, really good at captivating the eyes, and managed to capture someone with a problem like myself, it's a very great feat!
It's free!

Why shouldn't you use my service?
Because I can, and possibly will, stop reading right at the synopsis, comment "I can't read past the synopsis" and that will demoralize you as an author, you may think that you're a bad author even if you're not.

Dilemma huh? Alright, let's go, if you dare...
:meowsip:
 

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Why can I understand that even though I don't know Vietnamese, nya?
Because I made it very simple even a Korean like you could understand.

Very, good boy, ass up baby girl
Some recent stories posted on this site are written by LLM or the butler. Brace yourself! They are coming!

I wouldn't have made it as far as the reviewer did - should be "The Loving Villainess is an Ugly Duckling"
Human written stories with bad grammar VS AI-generated stories with perfect grammar. Who will win? The one who don't lose!
 

LuoirM

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Because I made it very simple even a Korean like you could understand.


Some recent stories posted on this site are written by LLM or the butler. Brace yourself! They are coming!


Human written stories with bad grammar VS AI-generated stories with perfect grammar. Who will win? The one who don't lose!
doesn't
 

LuoirM

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I would like to give you something that would make you question your sense of reality and traumatize you but instead take a power fantasy: 100
Did you change the title to "100 Fables until my death", capitalizing one letter only when there's 4 to do?
 
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