Very bad free feedback thread.

[Dredd_Sama]

I read the first three chapters.
It was pretty decent.
Aside from some occasional, very minor formatting issues, it read generally well.
I also understood the concept you were trying to make and the atmosphere you were trying to build in the first three chapters, which is definitely a plus. No one wants to read two or three chapters of nothing.

Well, keep up the good work!
And I hate Beth to death.

Thanks i really appreciate it....

 

[Nevafrost]

The Truth is Mysterious

The four princesses are trying to solve a mystery together. The path won't be an easy one and they will have to confront so many obstacles. While trying to unravel the mystery, they will meet their destinied partners and some untold truths. However, they will unravel the truth behind all...

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If you are still up for it