ThisAdamGuy
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Part of my story has the MC working at one of those mall Santa setups. I want it to be cute, but I'm worried I might be laying it on a little thick. What do you think?
“Mama!” she squealed. “Thee Thatha! Thee Thatha, Mama!”
“Yes, sweetie, you’re going to go see Santa!” her mother agreed.
Joyce produced a scroll and unrolled it. “Name, please?”
“Mawggin!” said the little girl.
“Morgan?” Joyce took a moment to study the scroll. “Morgan…ah, here we are! Santa knew you’d be coming, Morgan, so he put you on his list of super special visitors."
“Can you say thank you, Balderdash?” he asked.
“Ankyoo, Bawadaaa!” Morgan burbled.
“I’m so glad you came to see me today, Morgan!” Charlie said. “Have you been a good girl this year?”
“Uh huh!” Morgan answered, nodding her head energetically. “I wakkadawg!”
“You walked the dog?” Charlie asked, astonished. “Did you do that all by yourself?”
“No, Mama hepped. Den I ate alllllll my brocky, Thatha!”
Charlie nodded sagely. “I see! You must be a very good girl if you ate all your broccoli! Well then, what do you want for Christmas?”
Morgan’s face lit up again. “I wanna heckopper!”
“Oh, a helicopter? I love helicopters! If I didn’t have my flying reindeer, like Balderdash here, I would fly a helicopter everywhere! Can you imagine that? Santa Claus in a big ol helicopter?”
Apparently, Morgan could imagine it, and the thought sent her into a fit of giggles.
“What kind of helicopter do you want?” he asked once she managed to settle down.
“A pintheth heckopter!”
“A princess helicopter? What’s a princess helicopter?”
“PINK!”