Thoughts on an all-girl harem story with chaos, combat and intimacy?

[Coldwarrior12]

Hey all,
I posted once before about my story but now that several chapters are out and things are developing, I figured I’d ask more directly:

If you’ve seen the story, or even just the concept, I’d honestly appreciate any thoughts. Even a short “not for me” or “this is cool” is totally valid.

The idea is simple, though a bit wild:
A dominant female MC who gains power through both fighting and sex, set in a chaotic fantasy world where men ruled and failed, and women now fight to reshape everything. It’s violent, emotional, and often explicit, but also tries to stay character-focused. No male love interests. Just one girl slowly building an intense all-girl harem, where each bond adds to her strength, emotionally and literally.

I know it’s niche. Not trying to convert anyone. Just curious if stories like this have a place, or if I’m just writing it for myself and a tiny corner of the internet.

If you’ve read it, or if you just have a reaction to the idea, feel free to drop your thoughts. I’m open to criticism as long as it’s respectful.


Thanks for reading.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

This type of thing is not rare. There are plenty of all girl harem novels on this site, so they definitely have a place. Though, if I had to say it's not for me for a few reasons.

 

[HisDivineShadow]

I read three chapters. I don’t usually read this genre, so I’m not sure what fans are looking for. Maybe this is exactly what’s valued in the genre?
Your MC gave up her life and drank something from a stranger? What was the motivation? There’s too much going on, but nothing really leaves an aftertaste. It just feels like an obstacle course.
But, as I said, I don’t know how this genre works, so feel free to ignore my comments. Still, it just confirmed once again, this isn’t for me
Anyway
Wishing you all the best and continued growth in what you do.

 

[Coldwarrior12]

I read three chapters. I don’t usually read this genre, so I’m not sure what fans are looking for. Maybe this is exactly what’s valued in the genre?
Your MC gave up her life and drank something from a stranger? What was the motivation? There’s too much going on, but nothing really leaves an aftertaste. It just feels like an obstacle course.
But, as I said, I don’t know how this genre works, so feel free to ignore my comments. Still, it just confirmed once again, this isn’t for me
Anyway
Wishing you all the best and continued growth in what you do.

Thank you for the comment, Yeah you need to read to understand but it's like that in the genre: fast and to the point with less explanation, more doing.

 

[AstreiaNyx]

I’m not a fan of harem, but clearly it’s doing well here if you sort series by popularity. I haven’t read your novel yet but based on your description, I’m not sure a story with an anti-men undercurrent or theme would do well on this platform.

Personally, I prefer well-rounded characters, men or women, not stories that demonise one group just to make the other look better. Most of my vocal readers are male and they come here for hot, cute yuri, not to be preached at about how men are disgusting.

That said, I haven’t actually read your novel, so if that’s not what you intended then I’ve got no further comment.

 

[Humanistheart]

I like harem anime, mildly interested, but the title... Kuina: Rise of the All-Girl Harem, I mean. I guess you have to grab people's attention but it seems so, I don't know... I can't put my finger on it but its offputting.