The Last to Comment Wins

[Shiriru_B]

Wah!

 

[JayMark]

Wah moo!

 

[Shiriru_B]

Dang it. *explodes*

 

[Tempokai]

Dang it. *explodes*

tolerance achieved

 

[JayMark]

moo

 

[Shiriru_B]

tolerance achieved

I was looking from my peripheral but noticed something was different so I read it .

 

[Tempokai]

I'm winning currently by writing 3k long treatise on how pacing works

 

[Shiriru_B]

Wah!

 

[JayMark]

Moooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

 

[Tempokai]

I'm winning currently by losing my braincells

 

[Shiriru_B]

Wah!

 

[SRB]

Oh, hey, I'm winn- *explodes*

 

[JayMark]

Moo

 

[Shiriru_B]

wah!

 

[SRB]

Why did I explo- *explodes*

 

[Tempokai]

I'm winning currently by inviting you all to think about what I've wrote:

Pacing questions for everyone.

Pacing in storytelling is defined as "the speed or tempo at which a story unfolds". As readers, we all can see when the story stalls or goes too fast according to our guts. But, as writers, we can't seemingly find out why reader A said it was "glacial" and reader B says it's"perfectly paced"...

forum.scribblehub.com

 

[Shiriru_B]

Why did I explo- *explodes*

? *unexplodes you*

 

[JayMark]

Stop it. Get help. Moo.

 

[Shiriru_B]

Wah!

 

[Tempokai]

I'm winning currently by completing mini games