Suggestions on my fictional hellish city.

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Inanitas is the domain of Vorax and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon.
Theme - A city built on greed.

The pitt is one of the main cities because of the Arena and Golden Chapel. The story is set in this city. The city is divided into four sections.
1. Upper Pitt - Ducal families and noble fiends live here.
2. Lower Pitt - Merchants, poor and normal fiends, and corrupted live here (Market squares, brothel houses, cattle pens, Gambling dens)
3. Southern part or slums - Cambions and slaves live here.
4. Monuments - Dragon’s Fall ( The biggest battle arena in Inanitas) and Golden Chapel/Ashen Chapel( covers almost all of the southern part)

Apart from these-
1. Underground arena - an unofficial arena created by young fiends.
2. Devil’s delight - A tavern where Aegis lives.
3. The lower desert - A vast expanse where countless Marauder fiends train.

The Materials used.
Bone brick - A material created by mixing a grey paste and ground bone powder.
Water - water extracted from dead citizens.
Gold and silver - ornamental materials.

Workforce:
Labours - mainly cambions, mortal slaves.
Slaves - cambions, mortals.

Cattle -
Grogs - a lazy animal that cannot move due to its weight, bred only to be eaten.
Special meat - Made by mortals who are corrupted by force and deformed into short, fat creatures who lost the ability to think with their skin and face resembling what they once were.

Fiends don’t have warm emotions(love, sympathy, empathy, fear), replaced by (possession, Disgust, indifference, anger)

Cambions are part fiends, so they have episodes of rage. They are weaker than fiends in general. The slave race tolerated by fiends, hated by outerplane races.

Fiends see cambions as inferior versions of them, and as such, they are called bastards.

Slaves and cambions are strictly prohibited from entering Upper Pitt and are tortured and publicly humiliated by burning parts of them if they enter.

Cambions are not worth killing in the eyes of fiends. As such, they are subjected to anything that harms them without being killed.

Bandits and thieves often hunt slums even though thievery is strictly prohibited.
 
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Inanitas - domain of one of the Arch Devils, Vorax, and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon.
Divided into 25 huge land masses, each land mass is controlled by an Archduke.
Each land mass is further divided into 20-30 ducal dominions.
Theme - A domain built on greed.

The Pitt is one of the main cities or dominions because of the Arena and Golden Chapel. The story is set in this city. The city is divided into four sections.
1. Upper Pitt - Ducal families and noble fiends live here.
2. Lower Pitt - Merchants, poor and normal fiends, and corrupted live here.
3. Southern part or slums - Cambions and slaves live here.
4. Monuments - Dragon’s Fall ( The biggest battle arena in Inanitas) and Golden Chapel/Ashen Chapel( covers almost all of the southern part)

Apart from these-
1. Underground arena - an unofficial arena created by young fiends.
2. Devil’s delight - A tavern where MC works.
3. The lower desert - A vast expanse where countless Marauder fiends train.

The Materials used.
Bone brick - A material created by mixing a grey paste and ground bone powder extracted from dead citizens.
Water - also extracted from dead citizens.
Gold and silver - ornamental materials.

This is the city where my MC starts, and I wanted to know if there is anything else I could add?
Thought it would be more dark and depressing
 

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Inanitas - domain of one of the Arch Devils, Vorax, and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon.
Divided into 25 huge land masses, each land mass is controlled by an Archduke.
Each land mass is further divided into 20-30 ducal dominions.
Theme - A domain built on greed.

The Pitt is one of the main cities or dominions because of the Arena and Golden Chapel. The story is set in this city. The city is divided into four sections.
1. Upper Pitt - Ducal families and noble fiends live here.
2. Lower Pitt - Merchants, poor and normal fiends, and corrupted live here.
3. Southern part or slums - Cambions and slaves live here.
4. Monuments - Dragon’s Fall ( The biggest battle arena in Inanitas) and Golden Chapel/Ashen Chapel( covers almost all of the southern part)

Apart from these-
1. Underground arena - an unofficial arena created by young fiends.
2. Devil’s delight - A tavern where MC works.
3. The lower desert - A vast expanse where countless Marauder fiends train.

The Materials used.
Bone brick - A material created by mixing a grey paste and ground bone powder extracted from dead citizens.
Water - also extracted from dead citizens.
Gold and silver - ornamental materials.

This is the city where my MC starts, and I wanted to know if there is anything else I could add?
One of the main cities
I would suggest a shopping street kinds thing-market
A domain which is built on greed should have something greedy like a Casino
 

c37

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Thought it would be more dark and depressing
stated the laws and a few things that are important to the story.
One of the main cities
I would suggest a shopping street kinds thing-market
A domain which is built on greed should have something greedy like a Casino

Inanitas is the domain of Vorax and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon.
Theme - A city built on greed.

The pitt is one of the main cities because of the Arena and Golden Chapel. The story is set in this city. The city is divided into four sections.
1. Upper Pitt - Ducal families and noble fiends live here.
2. Lower Pitt - Merchants, poor and normal fiends, and corrupted live here (Market squares, brothel houses, cattle pens, Gambling dens)
3. Southern part or slums - Cambions and slaves live here.
4. Monuments - Dragon’s Fall ( The biggest battle arena in Inanitas) and Golden Chapel/Ashen Chapel( covers almost all of the southern part)

Apart from these-
1. Underground arena - an unofficial arena created by young fiends.
2. Devil’s delight - A tavern where Aegis lives.
3. The lower desert - A vast expanse where countless Marauder fiends train.

The Materials used.
Bone brick - A material created by mixing a grey paste and ground bone powder.
Water - water extracted from dead citizens.
Gold and silver - ornamental materials.

Workforce:
Labours - mainly cambions, mortal slaves.
Slaves - cambions, mortals.

Cattle -
Grogs - a lazy animal that cannot move due to its weight, bred only to be eaten.
Special meat - Made by mortals who are corrupted by force and deformed into short, fat creatures who lost the ability to think with their skin and face resembling what they once were.

Fiends don’t have warm emotions(love, sympathy, empathy, fear), replaced by (possession, Disgust, indifference, anger)

Cambions are part fiends, so they have episodes of rage. They are weaker than fiends in general. The slave race tolerated by fiends, hated by outerplane races.

Fiends see cambions as inferior versions of them, and as such, they are called bastards.

Slaves and cambions are strictly prohibited from entering Upper Pitt and are tortured and publicly humiliated by burning parts of them if they enter.

Cambions are not worth killing in the eyes of fiends. As such, they are subjected to anything that harms them without being killed(based on their abuser's desire).

Bandits and thieves often hunt slums even though thievery is strictly prohibited.
 
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