Story title?!

[McPhoenixDavid]

Woke up as a great elf in another world. Stayed away from world for a reason in an island. 500 years later, oppressed elves meet her and now the system (fed up with her not leaving) forces her to help them. Slightly inspired from Tensura but darker.

So.. Any title suggestions?

Examples:

• I Mastered The Tutorial Zone For 500 Years, And They Expect Me To Fight
• I Woke Up As A Great Elf
• The Overpowered Elf Nobody Expected.

 

[Alski]

I woke up as a great elf in another world but the tutorial island was to comfy so i didn't leave till i was forced to by my spiteful system.

 

[Lookbehindyou]

Depends on what they do with the oppressed elves. If they start a kingdom you could say.

This 500 Year Old Elf Doesn't Want To Be Queen

It just depends whatever the quirk of the plot line is. You know it best as the author.

As a side note, I'm a bit curious what this is even about. A system with a personality that gets angry at someone for not doing anything?! Is the system just for her or is it like a worldwide thing. Why would something like that even have any desires?

Is it actually force or is it like comedic nagging? If a system can force someone to do something, surely it can stop the elf oppression all on its own. And if I'm 500 years old I don't care what some voice in my head is telling me. Or maybe the main character does care about it enough to act.

Just my thoughts.

Also curious how the elves even found her if after 500 years no one else did.

Of course these are all just my assumptions from this little bit of text and you could have accounted for all of them.

And what is the difference between a great elf and a normal elf. Is there inherent inferiority within the elf species?

Anyway just yapping. Good luck with your novel.

 

[Eldoria]

I won't give you title advice. You know your fiction best. But you can consider my advice if you want your title to stand out not only among thousands of fiction but also be recognized by SEO.

Consider giving a unique, concrete title that describes the premise of your fiction. Don't make the title abstract and difficult to imagine.

I recommend using the MC's nickname in the title followed by the story's premise. I'll take my fiction, Blood Rose Princess Just Wants to Live in Peace with Her Little Daughter, as an example.

The title already contains several elements: FMC + an emotional bond with another character (her daughter), while also describing the FMC's ultimate goal in a dark fantasy world (implicitly).

To check how authentic your title is, you should do research by comparing it with other fiction titles.

This way, your title will be clear, unique, and friendly to readers and SEO (Google loves something unique).

 

[Macha]

This way, your title will be clear, unique, and friendly to readers and SEO (Google loves something unique).

Se* Offender?

 

[LeilaniOtter]

Doing it for Hers(Elf).

 

[McPhoenixDavid]

Se* Offender?

What?!

I woke up as a great elf in another world but the tutorial island was to comfy so i didn't leave till i was forced to by my spiteful system.

...I swear if my fic wasn't dark, I'd use this. Also, how did you know it was a "tutorial" island?
...oh, it was forgetful me.

Depends on what they do with the oppressed elves. If they start a kingdom you could say.

This 500 Year Old Elf Doesn't Want To Be Queen

That's a good one! Though the story is a bit darker.

It just depends whatever the quirk of the plot line is. You know it best as the author.

As a side note, I'm a bit curious what this is even about. A system with a personality that gets angry at someone for not doing anything?! Is the system just for her or is it like a worldwide thing. Why would something like that even have any desires?

It's been 500 years and she didn’t leave the tutorial zone. She was supposed to leave at lvl 10 but didn’t.

Is it actually force or is it like comedic nagging?

Not really.

If a system can force someone to do something, surely it can stop the elf oppression all on its own.

And if I'm 500 years old I don't care what some voice in my head is telling me. Or maybe the main character does care about it enough to act.

Well, some conditions met when the elves found the MC and the system grabbed the opportunity.

Just my thoughts.

Also curious how the elves even found her if after 500 years no one else did.

That's chapter 01.

Of course these are all just my assumptions from this little bit of text and you could have accounted for all of them.

And what is the difference between a great elf and a normal elf. Is there inherent inferiority within the elf species?

No spoilers ?

Anyway just yapping. Good luck with your novel.

Thanks!

I won't give you title advice. You know your fiction best. But you can consider my advice if you want your title to stand out not only among thousands of fiction but also be recognized by SEO.

Consider giving a unique, concrete title that describes the premise of your fiction. Don't make the title abstract and difficult to imagine.

Hmm.

I recommend using the MC's nickname in the title followed by the story's premise. I'll take my fiction, Blood Rose Princess Just Wants to Live in Peace with Her Little Daughter, as an example.

The title already contains several elements: FMC + an emotional bond with another character (her daughter), while also describing the FMC's ultimate goal in a dark fantasy world (implicitly).

Yeah.

To check how authentic your title is, you should do research by comparing it with other fiction titles.

Reasonable.

This way, your title will be clear, unique, and friendly to readers and SEO (Google loves something unique).

These are all really good advice.

Doing it for Hers(Elf).

Nice. Though feels a bit slice-of-life like or romantic.

 

[unlaumy]

Suddenly a Savior to Elf People

 

[McPhoenixDavid]

Suddenly a Savior to Elf People

That's a good one. Thanks.

 

[LeilaniOtter]

Nice. Though feels a bit slice-of-life like or romantic.

That's a good one. Thanks.

Actually, go with that one, yes.

 

[McPhoenixDavid]

well, we could add to it.
(Name of the person)'s Doing it for Her(Elf) in a Whole New World.

Actually, go with that one, yes.

That's really creative! ?

 

[LeilaniOtter]

That's really creative! ?

Suddenly a Savior has a great ring to it. "Suddenly, I'm a Savior for an Elven Race?"

 

[ConansWitchBaby]

I woke up as a great elf in another world but the tutorial island was to comfy so i didn't leave till i was forced to by my spiteful system.

I am hating how I would click on this.

The Other Elves Were Not! Able to Live Without Me?!
I Got Woken Up From Living Under A Rock by Elf Refugees
The ONE Time I Did Anything In My Neet Life: The Chronicles That Lead to the Rise of the Great Eleven Nation

 

[CinnaSloth]

500 Years of 101
(post hot elf on cover)

 

[McPhoenixDavid]

I am hating how I would click on this.

The Other Elves Were Not! Able to Live Without Me?!
I Got Woken Up From Living Under A Rock by Elf Refugees
The ONE Time I Did Anything In My Neet Life: The Chronicles That Lead to the Rise of the Great Eleven Nation

I was going to sleep but now I'm laughing like a lunatic. Curse you.

500 Years of 101
(post hot elf on cover)

Hehe

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Woke Up Better Than An Average Elf But Want A Nap.

 

[jrell]

System Error: Ancient Elf Still AFK

 

[McPhoenixDavid]

Woke Up Better Than An Average Elf But Want A Nap.

Nice nice.

System Error: Ancient Elf Still AFK

Lol