Lysander_Works
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So I will display two settings here to highlight two spacing options. I always seem to feel like there is too much or too little, and want to know what a majority thinks. Which looks better, Exhibit A or Exhibit B?
Exhibit A:
Claudia turned to Gresham with the sense of victory in her mind. "I told you she would surprise us. That's how Jane battles."
"I need to offer her a scholarship for this."
Claudia wasn't expecting that much gratitude from Gresham. She usually doesn't care at all about anyone's future but her own. Did she really see Jane containing that much potential? It's not like she was being serious, was she?
Exhibit B:
Claudia turned to Gresham with the sense of victory in her mind. "I told you she would surprise us. That's how Jane battles."
"I need to offer her a scholarship for this."
Claudia wasn't expecting that much gratitude from Gresham. She usually doesn't care at all about anyone's future but her own. Did she really see Jane containing that much potential? It's not like she was being serious, was she?
Exhibit A:
Claudia turned to Gresham with the sense of victory in her mind. "I told you she would surprise us. That's how Jane battles."
"I need to offer her a scholarship for this."
Claudia wasn't expecting that much gratitude from Gresham. She usually doesn't care at all about anyone's future but her own. Did she really see Jane containing that much potential? It's not like she was being serious, was she?
Exhibit B:
Claudia turned to Gresham with the sense of victory in her mind. "I told you she would surprise us. That's how Jane battles."
"I need to offer her a scholarship for this."
Claudia wasn't expecting that much gratitude from Gresham. She usually doesn't care at all about anyone's future but her own. Did she really see Jane containing that much potential? It's not like she was being serious, was she?
