Should I include what is happening in the background, or leave it to the reader's imagination?

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Midnight-Phantom said:
I am trying .. but kinda not working at all .. can't really think of anything right now...

so to make sense draft goes like this - MC stumbled upon the space tree was. (After describing things for a while), he finally touched the tree and lost consciousness. The system then activated. I really can't think of what to do with an unconscious soul floating in front of a colossal tree. When the system is spitting logs after logs ..
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Depending on how you’re writing this, you could skip this and start directly from when he woke up and what happens next. The log part can go into a separate subchapter (like chapter 1.2) as at that point the log is more of a cherry on top. The point is that you wouldn’t want to break immersion in the middle of a chapter. Additionally, it gives the reader the opportunity to skip the chapter if they so choose.
 
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